《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——学校生活(快乐高兴)
[基础语料]
1.She jumped for joy when she heard the good news.
听到好消息时，她高兴得跳了起来。
2.The children were over the moon about the surprise party.
孩子们对惊喜派对感到非常高兴。
3.They were thrilled to bits with their new house.
他们对新房子感到非常兴奋。
4.The whole family was on cloud nine when their son came home from the military.
儿子从军队回家时，全家人都乐翻天了。
5.She was grinning from ear to ear after getting the promotion.
她晋升后笑得合不拢嘴。
[情境呈现]
(2024·浙江1月卷·读后续写)高中生Eva害怕跑步，认为自己无法按要求跑一英里→跑步中几近绝望，然而，她使用了一个心理技巧，即专注于逐渐到达的小目标→Eva最终成功地跑完了一英里，并意外地获得了教练的表扬→……
[思路点拨]

[写作输出]
When Coach Pitt said“Nice work!”to her at the finish line，Eva was surprised.(1)(看着四周，她意识到教练的意思；looking非谓语动词短语作状语)。(2)（几分钟前似乎还很困难的任务；what引导主语从句)was now fairly easy.Instead of being left in the dust，(3)（她发现自己位列前三）。

“I just can’t believeit.”(4)（Eva大口喘气，难以克制激动；unable to形容词短语作状语）。Her mouth curved up into a smileand(5)（她脸上洋溢着自信的神情）。
[变式表达]
用while以及come to understand改写句(1)。

答案： ［写作输出］
(1)Looking around,she realized what her coach meant
(2)What had seemed to be a challenging task to her minutes before
(3)she found herself among the top three
(4)Eva gasped,unable to contain her excitement
(5)her face lit up with a sense of confidence
［变式表达］ While looking around,she came to understand what her coach meant.