《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——找回失踪的猫(希望期待)
[基础语料]
词汇 expectation 期待
anticipation 预期
eagerness 渴望
longing 渴望
desire 愿望
wish 愿望
yearning 渴望
looking forward to 期待
counting on 指望
hoping for 希望
hold onto hope 抱有希望
细节描写 句式 which引导非限制性定语从句;more...than比较句型;overwhelmed动词-ed形式作状语;独立主格结构;with复合结构
1.She held onto hope that her son would return home safely.
她仍抱着儿子能平安回家的希望。
2.The anticipation of the holiday made everyone excited.
假期的期待让每个人都兴奋不已。
3.Longing for the days when life was simpler，she recalled about her childhood.
她怀念生活更简单的那些日子，回忆起自己的童年。
4.With a wish for good weather，they planned the outdoor wedding.
他们希望天气晴朗，计划了户外婚礼。
5.The yearning for freedom was evident in his words.
他的话语中流露出对自由的渴望。
[情境呈现]
(2025·江西九校联考二模·读后续写)
Baby-Girl在夏天从主人公父母位于印第安纳州的房子失踪了→主人公和父亲在印第安纳州寻找猫，但未果→父亲认为猫可能遭遇了不幸→尽管已经过去六个月，主人公仍然坚信会找到Baby-Girl→主人公回到父母家过圣诞节，说服父亲开车带她去收容所，希望能找到Baby-Girl→父亲认为猫失踪太久，不太可能找到了→主人公相信能找到Baby-Girl→……
[思路点拨]

文体 记叙文 人称 第一人称 时态 一般过去时为主
续写思路 根据所给首句We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.可知，接下来要写他们查看那里的猫，希望能找到Baby-Girl。

[写作输出]
We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.I tiptoed into the room with a strong feeling of anticipation.Out of nowhere，I heard a familiar meow，(1)which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly
(这突然引起了我的注意;which引导非限制性定语从句).My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the zero corner.(2)She was skinnier than I remembered(她比我记忆中更瘦;比较句型)，but it was my Baby-Girl all right!(3)Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight,I opened the cage door
(内心充满极度的兴奋和高兴，我打开了那个笼子的门;overwhelmed动词-ed形式作状语).Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms.(4)I held her close,with my eyes welling up tears(我紧紧地抱住她，眼里涌出了泪水;with复合结构)，as my Dad looked on，
(5)his jaw dropping wide with shock(他震惊得目瞪口呆;独立主格结构).
[变式表达]
用feel，step替换下句中的词汇并改写，使两句意义基本一致。
I tiptoed into the room with a strong feeling of anticipation.
→Feeling a strong sense of anticipation,I quietly stepped into the room.
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答案： [写作输出]
(1)which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly
(2)She was skinnier than I remembered
(3)Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight,I opened the cage door
(4)I held her close,with my eyes welling up tears
(5)his jaw dropping wide with shock
[变式表达] Feeling a strong sense of anticipation,I quietly stepped into the room.