《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——大雪天救助小狗(悲伤难过)
[基础语料]

[情境呈现]
(2025·江南十校联考·读后续写)一只被遗弃的小狗在Lacey家附近徘徊→Doris在清扫门前景台上的大雪时发现了这只小狗→Doris把小狗带回了家，父母并不知情→小狗在地下室安顿下来，Doris喂它吃剩饭→小狗表现得很好，不吵不闹，并且似乎渴望陪伴→尽管Doris努力说服父母，但他们对于是否可以养这只狗没有给出明确的答复→Doris内心希望恶劣天气持续，这样小狗就不会被送到收容所→小狗到来的九天后，天气放晴了→……
[思路点拨]

文体：记叙文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时为主
续写思路：根据所给句子Doris knew it was time to say goodbye to the dog and felt rather worried.可知，接下来故事可能会继续描述Doris与父母进行最后的沟通，看是否有可能改变他们的决定。或者探讨Doris的内心挣扎，她对小狗的感情以及她对小狗未来的担忧。

[写作输出]
Doris knew it was time to say goodbye to the dog and felt rather worried.(1)She was sitting alone in the living room, hugging a pillow and rocking back and forth on the edge of a chair(她一个人坐在客厅里，抱着枕头，在椅子边上来回摇晃；hugging和rocking动词-ing形式作状语). She was trying not to cry but she was not strong enough.(2)Her face was wet and red,her eyes full of sadness(她的脸又湿又红，眼睛里充满了悲伤；独立主格结构).
(3)Just as Doris was at her lowest,her parents appeared from the doorway(正当Doris处于最低谷时，她的父母从门口出现了；as引导状语从句).
(4)With a smile on Mrs. Lacey's face,she said(Mrs. Lacey脸上带着微笑，她说；with复合结构),“Honey, Papa and I have agreed to keep the puppy as a part of our family. ”
[变式表达]
用“sitting动词-ing形式作状语”结构改写句(1)。
Sitting alone in the living room, she hugged a pillow and rocked back and forth on the edge of a chair.
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答案： [写作输出］
(1)She was sitting alone in the living room, hugging a pillow and rocking back and forth on the edge of a chair
(2)Her face was wet and red,her eyes full of sadness
(3)Just as Doris was at her lowest,her parents appeared from the doorway
(4)With a smile on Mrs. Lacey's face,she said
[变式表达］ Sitting alone in the living room