《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——孩子在野外救助父亲(沉着冷静)
[基础语料]

[情境呈现]
(2025·广东联考·读后续写)Mohan兴奋地得知自己可以和父亲一起去牧羊→他们和其他牧羊人一起，带着羊群进入山区牧场，准备在那里待六个月→Mohan和父亲及邻居Kishan带着羊群向北走→晚上，Mohan发现父亲的羊群跑下山坡，意识到出事了→Mohan决定去找父亲，让Sona留下保护羊群→Mohan拿着灯笼和牧羊棍去找父亲，发现父亲和一只羔羊在沟里，而一只雪豹正盯着他们→……
[思路点拨]

[写作输出]
Mohan knew he had to act fast. (1)He waved the lantern, casting flickering shadows that danced around the leopard’s eyes(他挥动着灯笼，投下闪烁的影子在豹子的眼睛周围飞舞；casting动词-ing形式作状语). The animal’s gaze never left Mohan, but the light seemed to make it hesitate. (2)Mohan’s heart beat violently in his chest,but he forced himself to stay calm(Mohan的心在胸口剧烈地跳动，但他强迫自己保持冷静). He remembered the stories his father told of how animals feared fire. With a deep breath, he threw the lantern towards the leopard, (3)breaking the quiet with the noise of glass breaking and fire roaring(玻璃破碎的声音和火焰的咆哮打破了寂静；breaking动词-ing形式作状语). (4)The leopard, terrified by the sudden burst of fire, backed a few steps, then turned and ran away into the forest(那只豹子被突然爆发的大火吓坏了，后退了几步，然后转身跑进了森林；terrified动词-ed形式作状语).
[变式表达]
用“overwhelm和动词不定式结构作结果状语”改写最后一句，并保持意义一致。
Overwhelmed with fear by the sudden burst of fire, the leopard backed away slowly,only to turn sharply and flee, disappearing into the forest.
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答案： [写作输出]
(1)He waved the lantern, casting flickering shadows that danced around the leopard’s eyes
(2)Mohan’s heart beat violently in his chest,but he forced himself to stay calm
(3)breaking the quiet with the noise of glass breaking and fire roaring
(4)The leopard, terrified by the sudden burst of fire, backed a few steps, then turned and ran away into the forest
[变式表达] Overwhelmed with fear;only to turn sharply and flee, disappearing into the forest