《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——帮助退伍军人(温暖舒适)
[基础语料]

[情境呈现]
(2025·云南二次检测·读后续写)Laura Mulvihill 在乔治亚州接了一位 89 岁的退伍军人 Ronald Dembner 回家→发现他的家脏乱不堪，无人照顾→她尝试联系多个机构寻求帮助，但都未果→她通过社交媒体发起求助，形成了一个帮助 Ronald 的社区力量→……
[思路点拨]

文体：记叙文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时为主
续写思路：根据所给首句 Dozens of volunteers came forward to help，with a desire to make a difference. 可知，接下来会写社区中的其他人如何加入进来，提供物资、食物或者服务。
[写作输出]
Dozens of volunteers came forward to help，with a desire to make a difference. Equipped with brooms，mops，and boundless energy，they set to work，(1) ​​​​​​​(准备解决 Mr. Ronald 家被忽视的问题；形容词短语作状语).
(2) ​​​​​​​(志愿者们分成小组，各自负责房屋的不同区域；tackling 动词-ing 形式作状语).(3) ​​​​​​​(随着时间的流逝，垃圾堆逐渐减少；with 复合结构)，and the stains on the carpet began to fade. (4) ​​​​​​​(当脏乱的空间在他们眼前转变时，空气中充满了笑声；as 引导状语从句).(5) ​​​​​​​(最后家里整洁了，而且它也恢复了尊严和温暖).
[变式表达]
用 not only... but also... 倒装句改写句(5)。
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答案： [写作输出]
(1)ready to tackle the neglect that had overtaken Mr. Ronald’s home
(2)The volunteers split into teams,tackling different areas of the house
(3)With each hour passing,the piles of rubbish grew smaller
(4)Laughter filled the air as the dirty space transformed before their eyes
(5)Finally the home was tidied,and it restored to a place of dignity and warmth
[变式表达] Finally not only was the home tidied,but it also restored to a place of dignity and warmth.