《2025年金版新学案高三英语外研版》

Ⅱ.读后续写微点练——因长相被同学排挤但通过努力取得成功(相貌特征)
[基础语料]

[情境呈现]
(2025·长沙长郡中学入学考·读后续写)
Thomas因为脸上的黑色胎记而被排斥→他收到了一封来自姑姑的信，鼓励他要自信→姑姑和他亲戚的来信给了他勇气和鼓励→Thomas加入了学校的戏剧班，并在学校的戏剧表演中获得了成功→老师推荐他参加戏剧比赛→尽管外表不占优势，但Thomas在比赛中获得了第一名，他的自信心得到了提升→……
[思路点拨]

文体：记叙文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时为主
续写思路：根据所给句子After all the things Thomas had gone through, he still received letters from relatives.可知，接下来要描述Thomas如何通过这些信件获得更多的支持和鼓励，以及他如何利用这些鼓励来克服困难。

[写作输出]
After all the things Thomas had gone through ,he still received letters from relatives.
(1)Mom would always bring letters in and read them aloud to him (妈妈总是把信带进来，大声读给他听).
Coincidentally,(2)the letters seemed to come very timely whenever he met challenges or doubted about himself
(每当他遇到挑战或怀疑自己时，这些信似乎都来得非常及时；whenever引导状语从句).
(3)As he stared at the view outside the window,he saw the tree once again (当他凝视窗外的景色时，他又看到了那棵树；as引导状语从句).(4)But now it had fresh green leaves at the tips of the branches,which were reaching high into the blue sky (但现在它们的枝梢上长出了新鲜的绿叶，伸向蓝天；which引导非限制性定语从句). There were thousands of beautiful flowers around the tree. “That tree is me,”thought Thomas.
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用it形式主语句型改写(2)所在的句子。
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答案： [写作输出]
(1)Mom would always bring letters in and read them aloud to him
(2)the letters seemed to come very timely whenever he met challenges or doubted about himself
(3)As he stared at the view outside the window,he saw the tree once again
(4)But now it had fresh green leaves at the tips of the branches,which were reaching high into the blue sky
[变式表达] Coincidentally,it seemed that the letters always came very timely whenever he met challenges or doubted about himself.