《2024年仁爱英语同步练习册九年级全一册仁爱版》

六、写作训练。(20分)
生活变得越来越美好。我们的政府采取了环保措施，禁止工厂随意排放污水；制定了法律，严惩乱砍滥伐；鼓励种树，使大片的沙漠变成了青山绿水。我们的环保意识都增强了：购物用布袋，垃圾分类投放，节约用水……作为中学生我们应该如何保护环境，使我们的生活更美好呢？请以“How to Make the Future Life Better?”为题，根据以下要点提示写一篇文章。
要点：
1. 日常生活中，保持良好的环保生活方式和习惯，做到节水、节电、节粮。
2. 绿色出行。近距离尽量选择步行、骑自行车；远距离选择乘坐公共交通工具。
3. 从小事做起。购物用布袋代替塑料袋；回收废纸和废瓶子，循环再利用。
要求：1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
2. 80个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
题型分析：本次写作要求从中学生的角度写如何保护环境，使未来生活变得更好。人称可用第一人称（I, we），时态用一般现在时，适当使用情态动词。
行文思路：短文中的节水、节电、节粮这三方面，可结合生活来写。节水：淋浴代替长时间洗澡，随手关闭水龙头。节电：随手关灯，少用空调、电视等电器。节粮：提倡“光盘”，根据食量适量点餐，避免浪费。环保就在身边，选择从身边小事做起。
高分点拨：本次作文可分四段。第一段：讲述政府采取的环保措施。第二段：描写如何做到节水、节电、节粮。第三段：描写如何低碳环保和学会循环利用等。第四段：简明扼要地总结全文。书写工整，衔接自然，语句通顺、连贯，适当使用but、and、while等连词。
佳作展示：
How to Make the Future Life Better
Life is changing better and better. Because our government has taken many measures to protect the environment, such as ______________
If you can do a little, the environment will change better and the future life will also be more comfortable.

答案： 范文 How To Make the Future Life Better Life is changing better and better. Because our government has taken many measures to protect the environment, such as stopping the factories pouring dirty water, making laws to prevent people from cutting down too many trees and encouraging people to plant trees. As a student, firstly we should have three types of energy - saving: water - saving, electricity - saving and food - saving. We can save water by turning off running taps. We can take a shower instead of having a bath. Turn off the lights when we don't use. Use the air - conditioner less often. To save food, we should eat up all the food. We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out. Then we can walk or ride a bike for a short distance and take public transport to far places. Go shopping with cloth bags instead of plastic bags. Recycle waste paper and bottles. If we can do little, the environment will change better and the future life will also be more comfortable.