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假设你是简（Jane），某英语报社举办了一次征文比赛，话题为“环境保护”。请你根据下面的图片提示，以Stop Destroying Our Earth为题写一篇文章，向该报社投稿。
要求：1. 80个词左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 根据图片信息可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。



题型分析：本次写作应使用一般现在时，根据文字及图片提示，呼吁人们保护地球。
行文思路：本次写作可以分三部分进行：第一部分简要点出“部分人没能认识到保护环境的必要性”；第二部分是根据图片提示“人们砍了太多的树→水土流失→土壤沙化”描写沙漠的形成过程；第三部分表达自己的观点并发出号召。
高分点拨：使用but、so、when、and等连词，以使文章通顺、流畅；同时写作时注意给文章分段，以便所述内容能一目了然。
佳作展示：
Stop Destroying Our Earth
The world is developing very quickly, but
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If we don’t stop destroying the earth, we will lose our home one day.

答案： 范文 Stop Destroying Our Earth The world is developing very quickly, but many people still haven’t realized the need to protect the earth. We are destroying the earth. It has become a serious problem. People are building a lot of buildings, so they cut down more and more trees. When it rains, the rain washes the soil away, and because of this, there are more floods. When the wind is strong, it blows the soil away and farmlands become desert. That’s why we have so many sandstorms. If we don’t stop destroying the earth, we will lose our home one day.