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五、写作训练。
假如你是某校九年级学生刘莉，是家里的独生女。你的父母决定再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友彼得（Peter）来信询问中国人口及生育政策的变化。请给他回一封信，内容要点如下：
1. 简单解释我国生育政策；
2. 得知父母决定再生一个孩子后你十分苦恼，担心父母有了第二个孩子，对你的关注会减少；
3. 征求彼得的看法。
要求：1. 100个词左右；
2. 提示词仅供参考，可自由发挥；
3. 信的开头已写好，不计入总字数。
提示词：change...into..., make a decision, ask for, share ... with ..., pay attention to...
题型分析：这是一篇书信，内容涉及我国的人口生育政策。原来的独生子女将会成为哥哥姐姐，有人会和他们分享父母的关爱。他们会感到苦恼和无助，需要倾诉。
行文思路：根据所给信息，先向彼得介绍当前的人口生育政策是什么。然后谈谈自己的父母想要第二个孩子时，自己的心理活动。最后向彼得征求意见，询问其看法，从而疏导自己的情绪。
高分点拨：通过对内容要点和提示词的对比分析，不难发现，提示词不仅是对遣词造句的提示，更是对写作顺序的提示。首先利用这些词汇结合写作要求组建基本句型，然后根据行文需要增加细节。写作时注意准确运用时态和人称，合理使用现在完成时。正确运用关联词语和句式，注意逻辑关系。同时，还可以根据自己的所见所闻，自由发挥，使行文更加丰富。
佳作展示：
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I'm glad to explain to you the population and birth policy in China.

答案： 范文
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I'm glad to explain to you the population and birth policy in China.
The Chinese government has carried out three - child policy now. That means every family can have three children. My parents have made a decision to have a second child. They have asked for my opinions. I'm very worried about it. It is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, but I will have to share everything with the child. Also, I'm afraid my parents will pay much more attention to the child than me. As you have a younger sister, do you have similar problems? What's your opinion about this?
Yours,
Liu Li