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八、（2024·长沙中考改编）书面表达（15分）
学校英文校刊主编发起了主题为“What does Music Bring to Me?”的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：1. 80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。

What does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.

答案： One possible version:
What does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key，which opens a door to the world for me.
Music brings me hope and strength during hard times，offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges.
⇨that 引导定语从句
Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young，I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness，I made lots of friends. Besides，music opens my eyes. Through music，I can broaden my horizon，sharpen my mind，and deepen my understanding.
⇨=do with
Also，music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall，music enriches my life，making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
⇨that 引导宾语从句，that 可省略
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：使用一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示：要求以“What does Music Bring to Me?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍音乐给自己带来的好处；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。