《2025年实验班提优大考卷九年级英语上册译林版》

七、书面表达（20分）
假设你是李明，你最近认识的美国笔友迈克给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你进入九年级以来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑及感受。请你根据以下提示内容及你的实际用英语写一封回信。

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Dear Mike，
Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life. Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours，
Li Ming

答案： One possible version:
Dear Mike,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. I really like my school life here because I can get a lot of knowledge from each class. Teachers are all very kind and I have many good friends here.
However, I also have some problems as a Grade 9 student. I feel stressed every day because of too much homework. What’s more, I have no time for my hobbies, which makes me much unhappier. Also, I am not good at Maths, so I need more time on this subject. Then I often stay up late and I find it hard to stay awake the next day. I have tried my best but I made little progress in it.
But thank my teachers and parents for their help. My Maths teacher offers me some good ways to study, and my parents often encourage me and give me much good advice on how to plan my time better. With their help, I am not worried with one’s help在某人的帮助下
any more and I have made great progress. Now I can achieve a balance between schoolwork and my hobbies and I feel more confident than before.
How about your school life? Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。②时态：时态以一般现在时为主。③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己在学校的收获；第二步，介绍自己在学校遇到的困惑；第三步，介绍自己如何解决自己的困惑及感受；第四步，书写结语。