《2025年实验班提优大考卷九年级英语上册译林版》

八、（2025·扬州江都区期中）书面表达（15分）
九年级开学以来，来自美国的新同学约翰遇到了难题：他没有好朋友，经常感到很孤独；语文学习有困难，感觉很有压力。请从以下几个角度给他写一封信，为他支个招吧！
要点：1. 帮助其分析问题的原因；2. 利用颜色治疗法给建议（1~2点）并给出理由；3. 其他缓解压力的建议。（1~2点）
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。2. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3. 所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。4. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear John,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.




Yours,
Li Hua

答案： One possible version:
Dear John,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. For the first problem, you have not good friends and often feel lonely, maybe it’s because you are new here and people don’t know you well yet. For the Chinese study difficulty, it might be that Chinese is really a difficult language for foreigners. As for the colour therapy, I suggest you surround yourself with blue. Blue can make you feel calm, which can help you relieve stress. Moreover, you can choose yellow. Yellow can bring a sense of energy and cheer you up. There are plenty of other ways to relieve stress, such as running, dancing and singing. They can make you relax both physically and mentally. Also, listening to music is a good choice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文。②时态:时态为一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,帮助其分析问题的原因；第二步,利用颜色治疗法给建议并给出理由；第三步,给其他缓解压力的建议。