《2025年单元双测全优测评卷八年级英语下册译林版》

六、书面表达(30 分)

Dear Mary,
I'd like to tell you something about my classmate Li Hua.

You see, love can make amazing things happen.

Yours,
Andy

答案： One possible version：
Dear Mary，
I'd like to tell you something about my classmate Li Hua.
Li Hua got a heart disease last year. He had to leave school. Only an operation could save him. But his family was too poor to pay for it. Luckily, thousands of people, including his neighbours, the students and teachers, donated money to his family. He received a successful operation and got well soon. And now, he is back to school. He is still a top student. He says he is thankful to the people who helped him. And he will try his best to study hard and do lots of things for society in return.
You see, love can make amazing things happen.
Yours，
Andy
■ 思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇书信作文。②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一些有关我同学李华的事”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——同学名字、问题、得到的支持、现状等均要一一阐述。第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pay for 付款 ②thousands of 成千上万的 ③try his best 尽他最大努力
[高分句型]
①He says he is thankful to the people who helped him.（省略 that 的宾语从句）
②And he will try his best to study hard and do lots of things for society in return.（一般将来时）