《2025年单元双测全优测评卷八年级英语下册译林版》

六、书面表达（25分）
假设你叫鲍勃，请用英语写一封倡议信，倡议给张海捐款，帮助他的母亲。
内容要点：1. 张海一家十年前搬到无锡，但他父亲于两年前不幸去世；2. 他们一直生活贫困，现在他母亲又得了严重的疾病；3. 医生说手术才可能救他母亲，但他们无力承担高昂的手术费用；4. 假如我们能……
注意事项：1. 倡议信须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第4要点须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3. 词数80左右，倡议信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A student at our school needs help!
Zhang Hai is a Grade 8 student in our school. _______
Thanks a lot for your help!
Bob

答案： One possible version：
A student at our school needs help!
Zhang Hai is a Grade 8 student in our school. He and his family came to Wuxi ten years ago. Sadly his father died two years ago. The family live a poor life all the time.
And now his mother has a serious disease. The doctor says an operation may save her. But the cost of the operation is much too high. They do not have enough money for the operation.
If we can donate our pocket money to Zhang Hai, his mother will have the chance to have the operation.
Thanks a lot for your help!
Bob
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:这是一篇提纲作文。②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示:本文是书信体中文,所以按照时间顺序将倡议的原因说清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍张海的家庭情况。第二步,介绍倡议给张海募捐的原因。第三步,提出倡议捐献零花钱。
[亮点词汇]
①live a poor life 过着贫穷的生活②much too high(费用)高
[高分句型]
①The doctor says an operation may save her. 医生说手术可以救她。(省略 that 的宾语从句)
②If we can donate our pocket money to Zhang Hai, his mother will have the chance to have the operation. 如果我们能把零花钱捐给张海,他妈妈就有机会动手术了。(if 引导的条件状语从句)