《2025年一遍过八年级英语上册译林版》

二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材原句: It's the best time to play football outside.
仿写:春天是放风筝的最佳时间。 ______
2 教材原句:The farmers are busy with their crops in the fields.
仿写:学生们正忙于即将到来的考试。 ______
3 教材原句:It makes them look a bit funny.
仿写:天气有点冷,所以我们有带她回家的想法。 ______
4 教材原句:They divided the year into 24 parts — this is the 24 Solar Terms.
仿写:在课堂上讨论难题之前,老师经常把学生分成几个小组。 ______
5 教材原句:They have had a positive effect on Chinese culture for thousands of years.
仿写:过多的屏幕使用时间可能对孩子的健康和睡眠质量产生负面影响。(negative) ______

答案： 1 It's the best time to fly kites in spring.
2 The students are busy with the coming exam.
3 It was a bit cold, so we had an idea to take her home.
4 The teacher often divides the students into several groups before discussing the difficult questions in class.
5 Too much screen time can have a negative effect on children's health and sleep quality.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
连云港市一所实验中学正在举行英语写作竞赛。请根据下面所提供的信息,以“My favourite season”为题,用英语介绍你最喜爱的季节。人称：第一人称、第三人称
内容提示：
最喜欢的季节；该季节的特征；该季节可从事的活动；感想……
注意：时态：一般现在时 主题：人与自然
1. 词数不少于 80；
2. 短文须根据所给提示适当发挥,要求语句通顺。
My favourite season ______
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 段落 | 内容要点 |
| 第一段:点明自己最喜欢的季节 | ①My favourite season is summer. ②I like summer best/most because I can do a lot of/lots of/many things that I want to do. |
| 第二段:描写该季节的特征 | ①The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily/hard. ②The sea is blue and it looks really beautiful at sunset/when the sun sets down. |
| 第三段:介绍在该季节自己从事的活动 | ①It makes me relaxed. ②I enjoy lying on the beach. ③I love diving deep into the sea. |
| 第四段:表达自己的感想并点题 | ①Summer is exciting and I love summer. ②There is no doubt that summer is my favourite season since it can bring me so much joy. |

Step 2 高阶表达应用
1 I enjoy lying on the beach and eating ice cream.(用伴随状语结构升格) ______
2 I can see beautiful fish there. They are swimming happily.(用“see sb. doing sth.”结构升格) ______
Step 3 佳作展示评析
My favourite season
My favourite season is summer①. Some people think the weather is too hot, but② I enjoy summer in Lianyungang.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. But I can see beautiful flowers and③ green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and④ it looks really beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It makes me very relaxed⑤. My friends and I enjoy lying on the beach, eating ice cream. I love diving deep into the sea because⑥ I can see beautiful fish swimming happily there.
Summer is exciting and I love summer⑦.
①⑦首尾呼应,表明自己最喜欢的季节是夏天。
②③④but, and 连词的运用使文章条理清晰。
⑤“make sb. + adj.”结构中的 adj. 作宾语补足语。
⑥此处是 because 引导的原因状语从句,丰富了文章的句式结构。
本篇范文开头直接点明主题,然后介绍了夏天的特征以及该季节可以从事的活动。文章用词得当,感情充沛。

答案： 1 I enjoy lying on the beach, eating ice cream.
2 I can see beautiful fish swimming happily there.