《2025年一遍过八年级英语上册译林版》

过写作 写作能力拓展导练 答案 P25
一、单元主题词汇·高频词汇梳理
dangerous, protect, save, hunt, kill, duty, in danger, cut down, take action, stop...from...
dolphin, giant panda, squirrel, zebra, wolf, bat, bee, cat, dog, duck, rabbit, chicken, horse, tiger, elephant, koala, lion, giraffe, monkey, snake, bear, penguin
保护动物 Protect animals
种类 Kinds
特点 Traits
cute, lovely, brave, friendly, kind, helpful, smart, beautiful, lazy, scary, interesting, cool
外貌 Looks
white, black, grey, brown, big head, small nose, long neck, short tail, thin body
能力 Abilities
help, serve, catch, hunt, build, swim, find, search, guard
野生动物 Wild Animals
二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材原句:It is difficult for them to have babies.
仿写:对于我们来说,学会如何与别人相处是必要的。 ______
2 教材原句:As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat.
仿写:结果,那天上午我无事可做。 ______
3 教材原句:Luckily, the government has taken action.
仿写:为什么不采取行动保护这些濒危(endangered)动物呢? ______
4 教材原句:Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is creasing.
仿写:多亏了你的帮助,我的语法错误的数量正在减少。 ______
5 教材原句:We also give her a special cake and some gifts in order to celebrate her birthday every year.
仿写:为了能早点回家,他很快完成了工作。 ______

答案： 1 It is necessary for us to learn how to get on with others.
2 As a result, I had nothing to do that morning.
3 Why not take action to protect these endangered animals?
4 Thanks to your help, the number of my grammar mistakes is decreasing.
5 In order to go home earlier, he quickly finished his work.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
假设你们学校正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动,请根据思维导图的提示,从图片中选择一种野生动物进行介绍,并号召更多的人加入保护野生动物的队伍中来。
主题：人与自然 语篇类型：说明文 人称：第三人称
| LooksAbilitiesWild animalQualitiesFoodDanger | tiger | red-crowned crane |
| | wolf | giant panda |

Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 第一段:点明自己要介绍的动物 |
| Now let me tell you something about ... |
| 第二段:介绍动物的特点及处境 |
| ①Wolves are not very big. They have thick fur. ②They can see, hear and smell things far away. ③They are good at/do well in ... ④However, they are in danger now. First... Second... ⑤They are in danger because of ... |
| 第三段:表达建议 |

| ①Animals are important to nature. We should be friendly to ... ②Animals are our friends and important to nature so we should take action to protect them. |
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1 There are fewer and fewer wolves because humans hunt and kill them.
(1)用 because of 升格 ______
(2)用 the number of 升格 ______
2 We should stop killing them and be friendly to them.(用“It is + necessary”升格) ______
Step 3 佳作展示评析
|$ Animals are our friends, but now I am worried about them because^1 some of them are in danger. Now let me tell you something about wolves. Wolves are not very big. They have thick fur. They can see, hear and smell things far away. They can run for hours without stopping. They are good at working as a team. They never kill smaller animals for fun. Wolves eat smaller animals and sometimes insects. However, they are in danger now. First^2, their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. Second^3, there are fewer and fewer wolves because humans hunt and kill them. Animals are important to nature. We should stop killing them and be friendly to them. We should also build more reserves for them. $| ①because 引导的原因状语从句,说明“我”担心动物的原因,为下文引出话题作铺垫。 ②③First, Second 的使用使文章条理清晰。 本文主要呼吁人们保护野生动物,文中还陈述了动物处境危险的两点原因,有自己的观点,是一篇佳作。 |

答案： 1
(1)There are fewer and fewer wolves because of humans' hunting and killing.
(2)The number of wolves is becoming smaller and smaller because of humans' hunting and killing.
2 It is necessary for us to stop killing them and be friendly to them.