《2025年一遍过八年级英语上册译林版》

1 教材原句: With the boat school, children have a chance to learn even when there are floods.
仿写:有了移动图书馆,孩子们即使在偏远地区也有机会读书。______

答案： With the mobile library, kids have a chance to read books even in remote areas.

2 教材原句:... but I am looking forward to having a go.
仿写:她期待着参加才艺表演。______

答案： She is looking forward to taking part in the talent show.

3 教材原句: In this way, we are more aware of the importance of a healthy diet.
仿写:通过这种方式,我们更加意识到污染的危害。______

答案： In this way, we are more aware of the dangers of pollution.

4 教材原句: I like to spend time with them.
仿写:我喜欢在周末和我的祖父母一起度过时光。______

答案： I love to spend time with my grandparents at weekends.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
某英文网站正在举办征文活动,请根据网站征文要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
语篇类型：应用文
Beautiful School Day Wanted!
We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire(鼓舞) our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you have an amazing experience at school?
时态：一般过去时
Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful.
注意：1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. ______
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 开头:引出话题 |
| ①Now I would like to share... |
| ②One day when I was in Grade 7... |
| 中间:详细介绍 |
| ①That day was sunny./The sun was shining brightly. |
| ②We had a game and our teacher asked us to... |
| ③The task was very difficult/interesting/... |
| ④We worked hard and always helped each other. |
| ⑤We were very proud of ourselves. |
| ⑥We didn't lose heart. Instead, we... |
| 结尾:表达观点 |
| ①Teamwork is really important. |
| ②Many hands make light work. |
| ③What I like best about the day is... |
| ④I had a really good time working with my classmates. |

Step 2 高阶表达应用
1 The task was very difficult. Nobody thought we could finish it. (用“such... that...”结构升格)______
2 In my opinion, the best part of the day is our good teamwork. (用主语从句升格)______
Step 3 佳作展示评析
| My Beautiful School Day | 1 such... that... 句型增强语气,丰富句式。2 被动语态点明主谓关系。3 经典谚语引出个人观点,语言地道,过渡自然。 作者简洁明了地描述了事情的起因、经过、结果,清楚地表达了个人感悟。文章有叙有议,条理清晰。 |
| My school life is full of beauty. Now I would like to share one of my beautiful school days with you. That day was sunny. We had a game and our teacher asked us to finish a task in groups. We needed to give a lesson about English grammar and make it both easy and interesting. It was such a difficult task that 1 nobody thought we could finish it. We had a heated discussion. Although sometimes we were in disagreement, we solved it smoothly. After a day's hard work, our group won and each of us was presented with 2 a cute pencil. We were very proud. As we all know, many hands make light work 3. What I like best about the day is our good teamwork. | |

答案： 1 It was such a difficult task that nobody thought we could finish it. 2 What I like best about the day is our good teamwork.