《2025年金版新学案高三总复习英语》

Part 1. 应用文考教衔接提分练—短文（人物介绍）
3 段式: 要介绍的人物→简介人物→人物感动人之处
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在组织以“我眼中的英雄”为题的作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介；2. 她或他令你感动的地方。
第一步 斟酌词句 靓化表达（加黑体部分请用本单元所复习的词汇和句式）
1. 我的妈妈是我眼中的英雄。她在一家超市做收银员。（定语从句）The hero in my eyes is my motherwho takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket.
2. 我原以为她的工作很容易，但我渐渐意识到，这些年来妈妈一直怀着极大的热情做着一份出色的工作，值得尊重。I used to think her job easy, butI gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion.
3. 母亲以她的工作为荣。她笑迎顾客，即使累了也坚持努力工作。(省略句)My mother takes pride in her work. She faces customerswith a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired.
4. 虽然她每天工作时间很长，但她仍抽空做家务并花时间陪我。(状语从句)Though she works long hours daily, she finds time to do housework and spends time with me.
5. 在她的鼓舞下，我学会了在遇到困难时不轻易承认失败。(分词短语作状语)Inspired by her,I have learnt not to acknowledge defeat easily when I encounter difficulties.
第二步 恰当过渡 完美成文（请利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇，如 moreover 等）

答案： 1.who takes up a position as 2.I gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion 3.with a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired 4.Though she works long hours daily 5.Inspired by her,I have learnt not to acknowledge defeat easily when I encounter difficulties. 第二步 The Hero in My Eyes The hero in my eyes is my mother who takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket. I used to think her job easy,but I gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion.Moreover,my mother takes pride in her work.She faces customers with a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired.Though she works long hours daily,she finds time to do housework and spends time with me. Inspired by her,I have learnt not to acknowledge defeat easily when I encounter difficulties.

Part 2. 续写考教衔接提能练
教材语料整合

拓展语料积累 [外貌细节描写: 身材、皮肤]


续写语料运用 [用表“外貌细节描写”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]

答案： ①a beautiful girl with long black hair and big brown eyes ②had a small nose and a mouth with full lips ③couldn’t help but notice her elegance and beauty ④kissed our cheeks,we talked a lot ⑤witnessed us chatting delightedly