《2025年考点测试卷高中英语》

四、应用文写作
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括:
(1)你建议的线路;
(2)你的理由;
(3)你的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:长江Yangtze River
泰山Mount Tai
Dear Jim,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.

Yours,
Li Hua

答案： 审题:
人称:第三人称为主,第一人称为辅
时态:一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅
One possible version
Dear Jim,
(表示欢迎)I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
(推荐路线及理由)Of the two school trips, I highly recommend the tour along the Yangtze River to you. As China’s longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization, Yangtze River gives you an opportunity to learn more about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the river offers stunning natural scenery for you to feast your eyes on. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.(表语从句)
(表达祝愿)Hope that you’ll have an unforgettable trip in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳句变式】So I think travelling along the Yangtze River would be a better choice.