《2025年优化学案高中英语选择性必修第一册人教版》

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farmhouse listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farmhouse were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet. The colours of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ________________________________
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. ________________________________
技法指导
★步骤1 理解全文，把握主线
通读短文，可知本文大意是：某年夏天父亲带我乘飞机去新墨西哥州的西大荒度假，在保罗叔叔的农场里，我和爸爸喂鸡牧羊，尽情体验田园生活。看到父亲和叔叔骑马的样子十分潇洒，我特别羡慕。于是，在父亲的陪伴下，我跨上马背享受骑马的乐趣……
★步骤2 分析关键词和段首提示，展开想象合理续写
续写第一段首句是：突然马的前面跳出来一只小兔子。根据语境可知，本段应该主要描写兔子突然出现之后发生的事情。由生活常识可知，兔子的突然出现会让马受惊。故本段应该写马受惊之后狂奔的情景。
续写第二段首句是：我们不知道到达了什么地方，这时天就要黑了。由本句可知我和父亲迷路了，那么本段的情节应当围绕迷路之后的情况展开。
★步骤3 结合逻辑和常识，确定结局
根据“Don't be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!”可知，短文的线索是：兔子意外出现——马受惊狂奔——父子迷路——返回农场。从故事的发展来看，要注意人物心理活动的描写，同时要注意第一段段尾的内容和第二段首句的衔接要合理，第一段的最后要有迷路的情节设计。
写作模板
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This ... frightened ... made it run wildly. I tried my best to control ...Frightened ... keep my balance ... Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped ... my dad ... Seeing ... he felt relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we didn't know ... caught our attention and drove us to the river bank. We went along ... But it was difficult ... Just as we were ..., we heard a faint voice from the distance ... So we cried back ... Finally ... back home. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!

答案： 写作模版
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he felt relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we didn't know where the farmhouse was. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the river bank. We went along the previous track slowly. But it was difficult for us in the dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!