《2025年天星教育金考卷一轮复习单元滚动双测卷英语》

四 书面表达 ＞＞
［2025 山东济南摸底］假定你是李华,在暑假参与了一次社区志愿服务活动。请你给英国朋友 Frank 写封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你做的工作;
(2)你的收获。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。

答案： 人称 - 以第一、三人称为主
时态 - 以一般过去时为主
分享经历
谋篇布局 - 第一段:引入话题，表明“分享志愿者经历”这一目的
第二段:具体介绍你所做的工作，穿插描述对该经历的感受和你给社区带来的变化
第三段:表达通过这次经历你有什么收获和感悟
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Dear Frank,
I hope this letter finds you well. I want to share with you a community volunteer activity I had during the summer vacation (定语从句).
During this volunteer activity, I worked with a team of people to clean up a local park. We picked up litter, cleaned benches, and removed weeds from the flower beds. Although the work was undeniably hard (让步状语从句), seeing the park transformed into a cleaner and more inviting space made all our efforts worthwhile.
Engaging in this community volunteer activity proved to be an invaluable and enriching experience, leaving me with a profound sense of accomplishment(现在分词短语作状语). It allowed me to give back to my community, learn the importance of teamwork, and make new friends. I eagerly hope to exchange more such enriching experiences.
Best regards,
Li Hua
高分素材包
1.活动经过: be deeply engaged in their respective roles“深入参与各自的任务”；as the event drew to a close“随着活动接近尾声”；admire the fruits of the labor“欣赏劳动成果”。
2.想法收获: feel a sense of fulfillment“感到满足”；leave a lasting impression“留下持久的印象”；seek out more opportunities for growth“寻找更多的成长机会”。