《2025年一遍过七年级英语上册译林版》

二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材原句:A life without health is like a river without water.
仿写:人生没有朋友,犹如生活没有阳光。______
2 教材原句:I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
仿写:这个商店里充满了各种各样美味的食物。______
3 教材原句:I have a sweet tooth and it is hard for me to say no to cakes.
仿写:按时吃饭对我们来说很重要。______

答案： 1 A life without friends is like a day without sunshine.
2 The shop is full of all kinds of delicious food.
3 It is important for us to have meals on time.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己的日常生活和饮食习惯。→人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时
| 早饭(面包、牛奶等),步行去上学。 | 午饭(米饭、蔬菜等),朋友们却喜欢吃快餐食品。 | 晚饭(鱼、面条等),饭后散步。 |
要求：
1. 词数80左右,不要逐词逐句翻译,可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.______
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 第一部分:引出话题“我的生活方式” | | 第三部分:点明健康的生活方式的重要性 |
| I have a healthy lifestyle. | ⑦ It is bad for their health. | ① It is important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. |

| 第二部分:介绍自己的生活方式,包括三餐及感受 | ⑧ For supper, I often have . . . | ② I also plan to tell my friends to change their bad lifestyles. |
| ① In the morning, I usually have . . . for breakfast. | ⑨ And then I often take/have a walk. | |
| ② After breakfast, I go to school on foot. | | |
| ③ Exercise can help me keep fit. | | |
| ④ At noon I have lunch with . . . | | |
| ⑤ I like eating . . . | | |
| ⑥ But some of my friends like fast food. | | |
Step 2 高阶表达应用
We should have a healthy lifestyle. It is important.
(用“It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.”结构升格)______
Step 3 佳作展示评析
|$ I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a healthy lifestyle^1. In the morning^2, I usually have eggs, bread and a glass of milk for breakfast^3. After breakfast I go to school on foot. Exercise can help me keep fit^4. At noon^5 I have lunch with my friends at school. I like eating rice, meat and vegetables. But some of my friends like fast food. It is bad for^6 their health. For supper^7,I often have soup, fish and noodles at home. And then I often take a walk. It is important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. I also plan to tell my friends to change their bad lifestyles. $| ①引出话题,总领全文。②⑤⑦ 主题段落按照时间顺序进行描述,逻辑清晰。③④⑥ have sth. for breakfast, keep fit, be bad for 等本单元所学短语运用自如,体现了作者活学活用的能力。 本篇范文符合写作要求,结构完整。开篇引出话题;主题段落紧紧围绕一日三餐及活动展开,同时对不同的生活方式进行了评价,有自己的观点;结尾进行总结,说明健康的生活方式对我们的重要性。 |

答案： It is important for us to have a healthy lifestyle.