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Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
I am a little busy this term. I start my school at 8:00 a.m. and I usually finish my classes at 5:00 p.m. My school subjects are very interesting. I have Chinese, English, Maths, History and some others. English is my favourite subject. What's more ①, we always have a big sports meeting twice a year. I often take part in ② the long jump. My teachers are great and helpful. They always help us in every possible way ③.
I love my school life very much because ④ it is rich and colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
①What's more 引出学校生活的其他方面,使文章更加连贯。②take part in 为本单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。③in every possible way 体现了老师对学生无微不至的关怀。④because 引导原因状语从句,说明作者享受学校生活的原因,丰富文章句式。
本文从课程安排、学校活动、学校人员、对学校生活的感受四方面介绍学校生活,语言流畅,要点齐全,有助于同学们交流学校生活等话题。
四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2022 合肥庐阳区期末]假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Sam 想知道你平时的在校情况和周末的安排。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封邮件,并邀请他寒假期间在网上聊天。
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文章中不能出现真实的姓名和校名;
4. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
How are you these days? You want to know about my school days and weekends. Let me tell you.______
Hope everything goes well with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
I am a little busy this term. I start my school at 8:00 a.m. and I usually finish my classes at 5:00 p.m. My school subjects are very interesting. I have Chinese, English, Maths, History and some others. English is my favourite subject. What's more ①, we always have a big sports meeting twice a year. I often take part in ② the long jump. My teachers are great and helpful. They always help us in every possible way ③.
I love my school life very much because ④ it is rich and colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
①What's more 引出学校生活的其他方面,使文章更加连贯。②take part in 为本单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。③in every possible way 体现了老师对学生无微不至的关怀。④because 引导原因状语从句,说明作者享受学校生活的原因,丰富文章句式。
本文从课程安排、学校活动、学校人员、对学校生活的感受四方面介绍学校生活,语言流畅,要点齐全,有助于同学们交流学校生活等话题。
四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2022 合肥庐阳区期末]假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Sam 想知道你平时的在校情况和周末的安排。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封邮件,并邀请他寒假期间在网上聊天。
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文章中不能出现真实的姓名和校名;
4. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
How are you these days? You want to know about my school days and weekends. Let me tell you.______
Hope everything goes well with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:
Dear Sam,
How are you these days? You want to know about my school days and weekends. Let me tell you.
We often have busy weekdays. Our class starts at 8 o'clock. I usually have Chinese, Maths, English and Biology in the morning. Among them, I like Biology best because I can learn more about nature. In the afternoon, I often have two lessons. Then I always go to the sports field and do my favourite sports. What's more, we often have some wonderful activities. At weekends, I have some field trips with my parents. We can fly kites, go boating and pick some fruits and vegetables. They are very interesting.
How about your school life? Would you like to talk with me on the Internet in the winter holiday?
Hope everything goes well with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
How are you these days? You want to know about my school days and weekends. Let me tell you.
We often have busy weekdays. Our class starts at 8 o'clock. I usually have Chinese, Maths, English and Biology in the morning. Among them, I like Biology best because I can learn more about nature. In the afternoon, I often have two lessons. Then I always go to the sports field and do my favourite sports. What's more, we often have some wonderful activities. At weekends, I have some field trips with my parents. We can fly kites, go boating and pick some fruits and vegetables. They are very interesting.
How about your school life? Would you like to talk with me on the Internet in the winter holiday?
Hope everything goes well with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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