《2025年一遍过七年级英语上册译林版》

 Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 开篇点题 |
| ①Some hobbies are very relaxing. For example, my hobby is... |
| ②Everyone has their own hobby and so do I. |
| ③People have different hobbies and mine is... |
| 详细介绍:培养过程、收获与感受 |
| ①At first, I enjoyed... especially... |
| ②When I..., I decided to... |
| ③I like... because I get a lot from it. |
| ④I have not only made... but also learnt... |
| ⑤My hobby has brought me happiness and success. |
| ⑥It is also a good chance to... |
| ⑦I'm also interested in... |

| 简单总结 |
| ① Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it. |
| ②I hope you can have a try. You will find a new world. |
| ③I hope we can all find our own hobby and enjoy ourselves. |

答案： 【解析】：
这是一道英语写作题目，考查学生对于单元主题“爱好”的写作能力。从题目给出的谋篇布局指导来看，需要学生按照开篇点题、详细介绍、简单总结的结构来写作。开篇点题部分给出了三种不同的开头方式供选择；详细介绍部分要求阐述培养过程、收获与感受，给出了七个方面的提示内容；简单总结部分也给出了三种结尾方式。写作时需要运用一般过去时、一般现在时等时态，描述自己的爱好、爱好培养过程以及从中获得的收获等。
【答案】：
My Hobby
Everyone has their own hobby and so do I. My hobby is painting.
At first, I enjoyed looking at beautiful paintings, especially those of landscapes. When I saw my friend's wonderful paintings, I decided to learn painting myself. I like painting because I get a lot from it. I have not only made many friends who also love painting but also learnt a lot about colors and compositions. My hobby has brought me happiness and success. It is also a good chance to express my feelings and thoughts. I'm also interested in trying different painting styles.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it. I hope you can have a try. You will find a new world.

 Step 2 高阶表达应用
1 Painting helps me make new friends. It also helps me build my confidence.(用“not only... but also...”升格)______
2 We learn about painting skills and great artists.(用as well as升格)______

答案： 1 Painting helps me not only make new friends, but also build my confidence.
2 We learn about painting skills as well as great artists.

 Step 3 佳作展示评析
| Painting makes my life more colourful | ①be interested in doing sth. 为第一单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。②“not only... but also...”结构说明绘画这一爱好带给作者的益处。本文语句连贯,层次分明,条理清晰,详细介绍了培养绘画这一爱好的过程,并说明了自己的收获和感受。 |
| It's important to take up some hobbies in life. Painting is the hobby that makes my life more colourful.
At first, I enjoyed visiting museums, especially art museums. I was deeply interested in learning about the great paintings. Then I took the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting and encouraged me. The classmates were friendly and helped me a lot. I have not only made new friends, but also built my confidence.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it. | |

答案： It's important to take up some hobbies in life. Painting is the hobby that makes my life more colourful.
At first, I enjoyed visiting museums, especially art museums. I was deeply interested in learning about the great paintings. Then I took the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting and encouraged me. The classmates were friendly and helped me a lot. I have not only made new friends, but also built my confidence.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it.

四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2024 通州期中]运动能够增强我们的体质,锤炼我们的意志,丰富我们的生活。
某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的体育运动”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇 70 词左右的短文投稿,谈一谈你最喜欢的一项体育运动是什么,你为什么喜欢这项运动以及你平时都做哪些跟这项运动有关的事情。
提示问题:
● What's your favourite sport?
● Why do you like it?
● What activities do you often do about it?
Sports are important for us. ______

答案： Sports are important for us. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I feel relaxed when I play basketball. I also understand what team work really means. By playing basketball, I become strong and healthy, and I think I am outgoing now. I join a basketball club. Every Thursday I practise playing basketball with other students. The teacher teaches us some skills patiently. I practise hard in groups. And I often watch basketball games to learn from other great players. In a word, playing basketball makes me healthy and happy.