《2025年一遍过七年级英语上册译林版》

二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材原句：He is good at sport.
仿写：他擅长打乒乓球。______
2 教材原句：He is smart and always ready to help others.
仿写：他很友善,总是乐于帮助我解数学难题。______
3 教材原句：I enjoy playing Chinese chess and ping-pong.
仿写：埃米喜欢跳舞和听音乐。______
4 教材原句：I am happy to make friends with them.
仿写：他们很高兴能和老师们交朋友。______

答案： 1 He is good at playing ping-pong.
2 He is kind and always ready to help me with Maths problems.
3 Amy enjoys dancing and listening to music.
4 They are very happy to make friends with their teachers.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
你校正在开展“阳光校园,我们是好伙伴”主题活动。你的身边一定有很多品学兼优的阳光少年,根据下面表格中的内容用英语写一篇关于你的好朋友刘平的短文。词数60左右。
人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时
| Name | Liu Ping |
| Height(身高) | 1.6m |
| Looks | brown eyes and short black hair |
| Favourite clothes | T-shirts |
| Character | kind |
| ... | ... |
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
| 开头:开篇点题 | I have a good friend. |
| 中间:详细介绍 | ①His name is Liu Ping. ②Liu Ping is my friend. ③He is ... years old. ④He is/comes from ... ⑤He has brown eyes and short black hair. ⑥He often wears... ⑦He likes... very much. ⑧He is tall and a little thin, with a pair of glasses. ⑨He is very kind. |
| 结尾:评价总结 | ①I like my friend very much. ②I am happy to make friends with him. |
| 巧衔接 | 在描写朋友的外貌时,可以使用 and、because 等词衔接上下文,使文章更加连贯、流畅。 |
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1 He looks lovely. He wears a pair of glasses.(用with结构升格)______
2 I want to make friends with him.(用短语be happy to升格)______
Step 3 佳作展示评析
My Friend
$I have a good friend. His name is Liu Ping. He is 13 years old. He is from Dalian. He's 1.6 metres tall. He has brown eyes and short black hair. He looks lovely with a pair of glasses^1. His favourite clothes are T-shirts. He likes to wear black shoes because^2 his favourite colour is black. He is very kind. He often helps me with my studies^3. I am happy to make friends with him.$
1 with a pair of glasses 作伴随状语,既生动说明人物形象,又增加文章亮点。
2 because 具体说明他经常穿黑鞋的原因,丰富文章句式。
3 help sb. with sth. 帮助某人某事,体现出了朋友之间真诚的友谊。
本文语言流畅,要点齐全,全面介绍了自己的好朋友的情况。

答案： 1 He looks lovely with a pair of glasses.
2 I am happy to make friends with him.