《2025年一遍过七年级英语上册译林版》

过写作 写作能力拓展导练 答案 P10
一、单元主题词汇·高频词匯梳理
Hobbies 爱好
- 爱好$\nscience, geography, art, paper-cutting, drawing, jogging, swimming, volleyball, club, artist, scientist, designer, singer, player, painter\ncollect stamps, play basketball/football/ping-pong/the piano/the violin, watch movies, model planes- 喜爱的原因\nprefer, love, like, enjoy, be interested in, be good at/do well in, a good way to, make sb. sth., a fan of, be good with, use sth. to do sth.- 感受\npleasure, colourful, get ready for, enjoy oneself, have a great/wonderful time, make full use of, learn sth. from sth.$二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材原句: It helps me keep fit.
仿写: 它帮助他得到了很多钱。______
2 教材原句: At home, he likes to take things apart and learn how they work.
仿写: 她喜欢去不同的地方,并且了解世界是什么样子的。______
3 教材原句: What does he use the internet to do?
仿写: 你使用这些工具做什么?______
4 教材原句: Do you plan to join the Painting Club?
仿写: 我们计划去医院看望孩子们,让他们开心。______
5 教材原句: I hope my dream can come true.
仿写: 我希望有一天我可以环游世界。______

答案： 1 It helps him get a lot of money.
2 She likes to go to different places and learn what the world is like.
3 What do you use the tools to do?
4 We plan to visit the children in the hospital to make them happy.
5 I hope I can travel around the world one day.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
[2023 洛阳模拟改编]在繁忙而充实的学习之余,学生还应该拥有健康、阳光的爱好(如运动、绘画、读书等)。请选择一项你的爱好,以“______ makes my life more colourful”为题写一篇短文。
1. 要点:(1)What's your hobby?
人称：第一、三人称 语篇类型：说明文
(2)How do you develop this hobby?
时态：一般过去时
(3)What can you learn from your hobby?
时态：一般现在时
2.要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(2)语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范,70 词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
______ makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life.______

答案： 【解析】：
本题要求写一篇关于个人爱好的短文，需包含三个要点：一是说明自己的爱好是什么，二是描述如何培养这个爱好，三是阐述从这个爱好中学到了什么。根据题目给出的提示，人称主要使用第一人称，时态则根据要点分别使用一般过去时和一般现在时。文章类型为说明文，需要注意语意的连贯性和层次的清晰度，同时控制词数在70词左右。
【答案】：
Reading makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life. My hobby is reading. I developed this hobby when I was a child. My parents often read stories to me before I went to bed. Gradually, I fell in love with books. Now, I read various kinds of books, such as novels, science fiction and poetry. From reading, I've learned a lot about the world and people. Reading makes my life more colourful and meaningful.