《2025年5年中考3年模拟八年级英语上册译林版》

Dear chairperson,
I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 8.I'd like to join the DIY Club.I'm friendly and helpful. I like making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I'm crazy about DIY and I hope to make more friends.I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday. First, I picked a piece of bread. Then I put some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it. At last, I put another piece of bread on it. Mum liked the sandwich very much and I felt happy.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

答案： One possible version:Dear chairperson,I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 8.I'd like to join the DIY Club.I'm friendly and helpful. I like making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I'm crazy about DIY and I hope to make more friends.I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday. First, I picked a piece of bread. Then I put some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it. At last, I put another piece of bread on it. Mum liked the sandwich very much and I felt happy.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Zhang Hua【评分细则】一、评分原则1.本题总分 20 分,按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时,应从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为：
(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述清楚程度和合理性；
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性；
(3)上下文的衔接及全文的连贯性。3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定文章所属档次,然后按该档次的要求综合衡量,确定或调整其所属档次,最后给分。4.词数在 80 左右;如果少于 70 词,扣 2 分。5.书写较差,以致影响阅卷,酌情扣 1—2 分。二、内容要点包括以下 5 个要点,顺序不限,缺 1 个扣 3 分:1.性格;2.爱好;3.想加入该俱乐部的原因;4.分享一则自己 DIY 的故事;5.别人对该 DIY 作品的评价。三、各档次的给分范围和要求[优秀]18—20 分:要点齐全,结构完整,语句流畅,能使用较为丰富的语法结构和关联词汇,语法、词汇拼写错误极少,书写规范；[良好]14—17 分:包含绝大部分要点,结构较完整,语句较通顺,有少量语法、拼写错误,书写较为规范；[一般]10—13 分:至少包含 3 个要点,语法、拼写错误稍多,书写基本规范；[较差]5—9 分:至少包含 2 个要点,多数语句不通顺,语法和词汇拼写错误较多,书写欠规范；[很差]1—4 分:只包含 1 个要点,或少量单词或句子,酌情给分。说明:空白或所写内容与写作任务完全无关,视为 0 分。