《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

范文剖析《
中国的美食文化博大精深，源远流长，每个城市都有自己的特色美食。哪种美食最能代表你的家乡？请写一篇100词左右的英语作文，介绍你最喜欢的一种家乡特色美食。
内容提示：
1. What is it?
2. How is it made?
3. Why do local people like to eat it?
►►审题指导
1.文体:说明文
2.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
3.时态:一般现在时
4.写作要点:①你最喜欢的家乡特色美食是什么；
②它是如何制作的；③为什么当地人喜欢它
►►思路点拨

Beginning My favorite hometown food is...
Body how to make it
why people love it
Ending my own thoughts
►►范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
My favorite hometown food is jianbing guozi,a popular street food in Tianjin. ①It is a traditional Chinese breakfast and has things like batter, fried eggs, and guozi, a kind of deep-fried dough stick. All these ingredients create a delicious dish. ②If you want to make jianbing guozi, you need to start by spreading some batter on a hot pan. Then crack an egg on top of it. Next, add some sweet sauce and guozi on top ③and then roll it all up.
The local people in Tianjin love jianbing guozi because it is healthy,cheap and ④easy to buy. For me, ⑤ jianbing guozi is a great breakfast and it has Tianjin’s special taste. Both local people and visitors enjoy it.
If you visit Tianjin,don’t forget to give it a try!
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我想要满分作文
My favorite hometown food is jianbing guozi,a popular street_______food in Tianjin. ①________________________
_______batter,fried eggs,and guozi,a kind of deep-fried dough stick. All these ingredients create a delicious dish.
②________________________（要制作煎饼馃子）,you need to start by spreading some batter on a hot pan. Then crack an egg on top of it. Next,add some sweet sauce and guozi on top ③________________________.
The local people in Tianjin love jianbing guozi because it is healthy,cheap and ④________________________（在上班或上学的路上很方便买到).For me,⑤________________________.Both local people and visitors enjoy it.
If you visit Tianjin,don’t forget to give it a try!

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  技巧一：巧用 be known as 和 be made with 升格①   技巧二：巧用不定式作目的状语升格②  

  技巧三：巧用 before 引导的时间状语从句升格③  _______技巧四：巧用 be convenient to 短语升格④  

  技巧五：巧用 not only... but also 句型和 a symbol of 短语升格⑤    _______

答案： ①It is known as a traditional Chinese breakfast and mainly made with ②To make jianbing guozi ③before you roll it all up ④convenient to buy on the way to work or school ⑤jianbing guozi is not only a great breakfast,but also a symbol of Tianjin's special taste and culture