《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

A 范文剖析«
假如你是王红，在今天的班会上，同学们讨论了“我最喜爱的电影”，并对在电影院里如何做一名文明的观影者(well-mannered movie watcher)交流了想法。你的笔友Jack对班会的内容很感兴趣，请你根据以下内容，给Jack写一封100词左右的电子邮件。
写作要点：
1. 所有同学都参加了今天的班会；
2. 同学们最喜爱的电影：(1)刘平：喜剧片；(2)周雷：功夫片；
3. 谈谈在电影院里如何做一名文明的观影者。
►►审题指导
1. 文体：应用文
2. 人称：第一人称和第三人称
3. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
4. 写作要点：①介绍班会主题；②介绍同学们最喜爱的电影；③谈谈在电影院如何做一名文明的观影者
►►思路点拨

►►范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
Dear Jack,
Howiseverythinggoing? Now let me introduce today’s class meeting to you.
All the students in our class ①were in the class meeting. We had a discussion about the topic “My Favorite Movie”. ②Liu Ping likes watching comedies. They can help him relax after a long week at school. ③Zhou Lei likes kung fu movies about superheroes， because those superheroes always save the world just in time.
We also ④had different ideas about how to be a well-mannered movie watcher in the cinema. In my opinion,even if we are with our friends, ⑤we should keep the voice down in public. ⑥Speak softly for a short time on the phoneandtrytokeepawayfromothers.
Theaboveareallabouttheclassmeeting.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
WangHong
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Dear Jack,
Howiseverythinggoing? Now let me introduce today’s class meeting to you.
All the students in our class ①_______ the class meeting. We had a discussion about the topic “My Favorite Movie”.
②_______
③_______
④_______ different ideas about how to be a well-mannered movie watcher in the cinema. In my opinion,even if we are with our friends,⑤_______. ⑥_______(当你正在使用手机的时候),speak softly for a short time on the phone and try to keep away from others.
Theaboveareallabouttheclassmeeting. Bestwishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用短语 take part in 和 come up with 分别升格①④
技巧二：巧用 that 引导的定语从句和 who 引导的定语从句分别升格②③
技巧三：巧用 it’s better for sb. to do sth. 句型升格⑤
技巧四：巧用 when 引导的时间状语从句升格⑥

答案： ①took part in ②Liu Ping likes watching comedies that can help him relax after a long week at school. ③Zhou Lei likes kung fu movies about superheroes who always save the world just in time. ④came up with ⑤it's better for us to keep the voice down in public ⑥When you are using a phone