《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

A 范文剖析
俗话说：“民以食为天。”中国的饮食文化历史悠久、举世闻名。假如你是学生会主席李华，今年暑假有一些英国学生要到你校参加文化交流夏令营。作为学生代表，请你以“When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，向对方介绍去中国家庭聚餐时的餐桌礼仪。
内容包括：
1.他们需要注意的礼仪。
2.他们要注意这些礼仪的原因。
►►审题指导
1.文体:说明文
2.人称:第二人称
3.时态:一般现在时
4.写作要点:①需要注意的礼仪;②解释原因
►►思路点拨

►►范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people. In China, the table manners are different from those in your country in many ways.
①First, if you are invited, arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Second, when you eat, ②you should wait for the old to begin eating first to show your respect. ③ Third, we eat with chopsticks because it is a tradition. But pointing at others with chopsticks is impolite. By the way, ④you can’t give a clock to your friends as a present when you visit them. Because it sounds similar to the word “death” in Chinese. ⑤At last, you can help to clear the table to express your respect and politeness.
⑥When in China, eat as we Chinese eat!
⑦We Chinese people are very hospitable and we will go out of our way to make you feel at home. Have a good trip in China!
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When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people. In China, the table manners are different from those in your country in many ways.
①_______(首先), if you are invited, arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Second, when you eat, ②_______ for the old to begin eating first to show your respect. ③____(此外), we eat with chopsticks because it is a tradition. But pointing at others with chopsticks is impolite. By the way,_______④_______a clock to your friends as a present when you visit them. Because it sounds similar to the word “death” in Chinese.
⑤_______(最后但同样重要的是), you can help to clear the table to express your respect and politeness.
⑥_______(总之), when in China, eat as we Chinese eat! ⑦____
Have a good trip in China!
升格技巧
技巧一:巧用衔接词升格①③⑤⑥
技巧二:巧用 it’s better to_______do 句型升格②
技巧三:巧用 be expected to do 结构升格④
技巧四:巧用 so... that... 结构升格⑦_______

答案： First of all; it's better to wait; Besides/Moreover; you are not expected to give; Last but not least; In a word; We Chinese people are so hospitable that we will go out of our way to make you feel at home.

A 写作练笔
践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请根据下面的提示，以“Be a Student with Good Manners”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
提示：
(1) Introduce the good/bad manners you have seen.
(2) Your opinion about the good/bad manners.
(3) How to be a student with good manners.
►►审题指导
1.文体：_______
2.人称：_______
3.时态：_______
4.写作要点:①_______
②_______；③_______
►►思路点拨
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►►小试身手
Be a Student with Good Manners
It’s of great importance to be a student with good manners in our daily lives.
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答案： 夹叙夹议; 第一人称和第三人称; 一般现在时和一般过去时; 见到的文明或者不文明的行为; 如何看待这类行为; 如何做一名有素质、讲文明的学生; Last Monday morning,I went to school with my classmate Li Xin by bus. The bus was full of people so that there weren't enough seats for the passengers. When an old woman got on the bus at the next stop,Li Xin stood up at once and gave her seat to the old and weak lady. The old woman thanked Li Xin for her kindness. People on the bus spoke highly of her. I was deeply moved by her behavior and I decided to learn from her.
As students,we should form the habit of being polite and helpful. As the saying goes,"Politeness costs nothing but wins everything." We should always be ready to give a helping hand when we see someone in need.