《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

A 范文剖析«
进入初中后，你发现自己在生活和学习能力上都有了很大的提升，变得越来越独立了，这与父母及老师对你的帮助是分不开的。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文，在下周的英语课上分享父母和老师是如何帮助你的。

参考词汇:confident 自信的
►►审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
4.写作要点:①父母和老师给了我什么帮助；
②我取得了哪些进步
►►思路点拨

►►范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
Since I entered middle school, I’ve become more independent both in study and in life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed.
At home, ①I was a lazy and untidy girl before. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, ②they always say something good to me. ③I become more hard-working and confident because they encourage me a lot. These changes have a great influence on my life. ④Now I can take good care of myself.
At school, English used to be a headache to me. ⑤My teachers showed me different useful learning methods. They also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. That’s why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone. ⑥They help me do better than before.
Thanks to my teachers and parents,my life has changed a lot. I can’t fully express my thanks for their help!
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Since I entered middle school, I’ve become more independent both in study and in life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed.
At home,①________________________. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, ②________________________. ③________________________These changes have a great influence on my life. ④________________________
At school, English used to be a headache to me. ⑤________________________That’s why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone. ⑥________________________
Thanks to my teachers and parents,my life has changed a lot. I can’t fully express my thanks for their help!
升格技巧
技巧一:巧用本单元所学的 used to do sth. 句型升格①_______
技巧二:巧用含 take pride in sb. 的宾语从句升格②
技巧三:巧用“The＋比较级…, the＋比较级…”句型升格③_______
技巧四:巧用短语 be able to 升格④______________
技巧五:巧用 not only…but also …句型升格⑤_______
技巧六:巧用 with one’s help 短语升格⑥_______

答案： I used to be a lazy and untidy girl; they always tell me that they take pride in me; The more they encourage me, the more hard-working and confident I become.; Now I am able to take good care of myself.; My teachers not only showed me different useful learning methods, but also encouraged me to be creative and think independently.; With their help,I did better than before.