《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

范文剖析
假设你是思湘，你的美国笔友 Amy 来信想了解中国的传统节日——端午节。请根据以下导图提示用英语写一封 100 词以上的回信给她。

审题指导
1. 文体：应用文
2. 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
3. 时态：一般现在时
4. 写作要点：①端午节的时间和历史；②人们的庆祝活动；③这个节日的意义
思路点拨

范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
Dear Amy,
There are many important festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and so on. Now I ①want to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history of over 2,000 years and it falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. When we think of the Dragon Boat Festival, we probably think of Qu Yuan, ②a great poet in China. People ③like him because of his love for the country. On that day, people honor him by eating zongzi. ④It is a kind of traditional Chinese food and it is made of rice with meat, eggs and so on. The dragon boat races are another important part of this festival.
⑤I think the Dragon Boat Festival ⑥helps us remember the history of our Chinese nation and ⑦family can also get together on this day.
Best wishes!
Si Xiang
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Dear Amy,
There are many important festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and so on. Now I ①________ tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history of over 2,000 years and it falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. When we think of the Dragon Boat Festival, we probably think of Qu Yuan, ②________ in China. People ③________ him because of his love for the country. On that day, people honor him by eating zongzi. ④________ The dragon boat races are another important part of this festival.
⑤________, the Dragon Boat Festival ⑥________ the history of our Chinese nation and ⑦________（这也是家人聚在一起的好时机）.
Best wishes!
Si Xiang
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用 be glad to, one of..., think highly of, in one's opinion, remind sb. of sth. 等短语分别升格①②③⑤⑥
技巧二：巧用过去分词作后置定语升格④
技巧三：巧用 it's a time for sb. to do sth. 句型升格⑦

答案： ①am glad to ②one of the greatest poets ③think highly of
④It's a kind of traditional Chinese food made of rice with meat, eggs and so on. ⑤In my opinion ⑥reminds us of ⑦it is also a good time for the family to get together