《2025年名校课堂九年级英语全一册人教版贵州专版》

范文剖析
微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报正以“Smiles”为题举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的提示信息，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

审题指导
1. 文体：夹叙夹议
2. 人称：第一人称
3. 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
4. 写作要点：①微笑的力量；②有关“微笑”的经历；③你的感悟
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范文赏析
优秀作文长这样
Smiles
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts. ①It helps us get on well with each other. It can also bring us good luck.
When I was a young boy, ②I was very shy and I couldn't speak in public places. One day, I was asked to give a speech in class. I was so nervous that I did badly at the beginning. My Chinese teacher Mrs. Gu encouraged me to believe in myself. When I saw the smile on my teacher's face, I got ③much confidence. I won the first prize at last because of her encouraging smile.
Smiles are very helpful in our lives. ④Smile more and you'll look much younger. So let's try to smile more.
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答案： A person who often smiles usually gets good luck and gets on well with others. I was too shy to speak in public places more and more As the saying goes,"A smile makes you ten years younger."