《2024年世纪金榜高中全程学习方略英语必修第一册外研版》

实践应用
（2023·揭阳高一检测）
I was lacking in everything needed to start a new friendship in a new town.
My parents had moved to the town when they decided to look for new jobs，but they didn't realize I was really hurt when I had to say goodbye to my old friends. It felt frightful to be a new student in my new school. When my classmates were chatting，I felt left out. I was not good at math or history，nor was I good at drawing or dancing. I was shy and timid（羞怯的）. I had a few friends back at my hometown and it seemed that they were the only ones with whom I could be friends for my whole life. I felt there was no room for anyone else on my friends list. I was ashamed of myself，and believed I deserved no notice from others. That is，until Emily came to my world.
Emily was fearless，frank and easy to be around. She was everything I was not and I was too shy to come out of my shell. I met Emily in school almost every day but I never talked to her，even though we were in the same class. How I wished I could be like her，or at least be a friend of hers.
It was another ordinary day. I wandered to the bus stop in the morning and waited for the school bus. Birds were singing with their friends，but who could I sing with? I got on the bus and went straight to my usual seat，complaining in a low voice about getting up early and going to school like every other day，and about how things were going to be the same all over again. Little did I realize something different would happen that day.
注意：续写词数应为80～100词。
When I got up to get off the bus，my schoolbag was stuck on the armrest（扶手）.
写作思维流程
Step 1：谋篇布局
明确体裁、话题—读后续写，友谊
确定时态、人称—一般过去时，第一、三人称
续写线索—作者和埃米莉认识和成为朋友的经过
列出核心要点
1. 书包被卡
2. 撕破书包
3. 东西掉到地上
4. 埃米莉帮助
5. 成为朋友
Step 2：遣词造句
1. 我没有注意到，用尽全力站了起来。
I didn't notice it and __________ with all my strength.
2. 不幸的是，我的书包被扯烂了，所有的东西都掉在了地上。
Unfortunately，my schoolbag was torn apart and all the contents __________.
3. 我正要跪下来接它们。突然，我看到一只手递给我一些书。是埃米莉。
I __________ suddenly I saw a hand passing me some of the books. It was Emily.
4. 在去上课的路上，我开始和她交谈，惊讶地发现我们有很多共同点。
On our way to class，I began to talk with her and was surprised to find that we __________.
5. 当我告诉她我多么希望成为她的朋友时，她说：“我们已经是朋友了。”
When I told her __________，she said，“We have already been friends.”
6. 我很高兴我交到了一个新朋友。
__________ I felt that I had made a new friend.
Step 3：句式升级
7. 用with复合结构作原因状语改写句2。
__________
8. 用形容词作伴随状语改写句4。
__________
Step 4：完美成篇
__________

答案： Step2:遣词造句
1.stood up　2.fell to the ground
3.was kneeling down to pick them up when
4.had much in common　5.how I wished to be a friend of hers　6.How happy
Step3:句式升级
7.Unfortunately, with my schoolbag torn apart, all the contents fell to the ground.　　8.On our way to class, I began to talk with her, surprised to find that we had much in common.
Step4:完美成篇
When I got up to get off the bus, my schoolbag was stuck on the armrest. I didn't notice it and stood up with all my strength. Unfortunately, with my schoolbag torn apart, all the contents fell to the ground. I was kneeling down to pick them up when suddenly I saw a hand passing me some of the books. It was Emily. On our way to class, I began to talk with her, surprised to find that we had much in common. When I told her how I wished to be a friend of hers, she said, “We have already been friends.” How happy I felt that I had made a new friend.