《2025年优化探究同步导学案高中英语必修第一册人教版》

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假定你是李华，你喜欢探险。你打算进行一次太空旅行。请根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的旅行计划。
1. 做好必要的准备，比如：锻炼身体，了解太空的一些知识；
2. 畅想旅程。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：spacecraft 宇宙飞船 space station 太空站 in space 在太空中
审题谋篇：
第一步 明确要求
该写作属于应用文，故要用第一人称人称来写；旅游计划是未来的事情，故以一般将来时时态为主。
第二步 确定段落
本篇文章可以从以下几个方面入手：
Para. 1 首先表明自己的希望之旅；
Para. 2 自己需要做的准备工作及对旅程的设想；
Para. 3 预祝旅程愉快。
第三步 提炼要点
1. 奇特而又令人兴奋的地方 somewhere strange and exciting
2. 无数熠熠发光的星星 millions of bright shining stars
3. 玩得高兴 have a good time
第四步 句式升级
1. (一般表达)My destination is outer space.
→(高级表达)Where I want to go is outer space. (where 引导的主语从句)
2. (一般表达)My first visit will be to the most modern space station in space.
→(高级表达)My first visit will be to a space station, which is the most modern in space. (非限制性定语从句)
3. (一般表达)I hope I can leave for it now.
→(高级表达)I can't wait to set off at once. (can't wait to do)
连句成篇：
I'm eager to visit somewhere strange and exciting. Where I want to go is outer space.
To make my trip come true, I'm doing exercise regularly. What's more, I'm surfing the Net to look for information about space. My first visit will be to a space station, which is the most modern in space. Outside, there are millions of bright shining stars and in the distance I can see the red planet Mars too. How wonderful the trip is! I can't wait to set off at once.
I hope I will have a good time.
评分判断：
Is there a clear purpose for the trip?
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea?
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly?
Are all the words spelt correctly?
Are all the proper nouns capitalized?

答案： 第一步 将来
第二步 自己的希望之旅 自己需要做的准备工作及对旅程的设想 预祝旅程愉快
第三步
1.somewhere strange and exciting 2.millions of bright shining stars 3.have a good time
第四步
1.Where I want to go 2.which is the most modern in space 3.can't wait to set off at once