《2025年优化探究同步导学案高中英语必修第一册人教版》

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假定你是你校学生会主席 Miss Wang,现在小冬因不善于交流导致在交友过程中遇到了困难,请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的回信,给他提出一些建议或意见。
审题谋篇:
第一步 明确要求
该写作属于应用文类的建议信,故要用第一人称来写;主题是关于交友中遇到的困难,需要给对方提出下一步的意见或建议,故用一般将来时;同时兼顾书信的特点,选用合适的表达愿望的情态动词。
第二步 确定段落
本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手:
Para.1 首先要陈述自己的关心;
Para.2 指出问题产生的原因,并提出建议;
Para.3 表达自己的希望与祝福。
第三步 提炼要点
1. 交友有困难have trouble in making friends
2. 好恶likes and dislikes
3. 与……相处得好get along well with
4. 处于困境中in trouble
5. 积极参加take an active part in
第四步 句式升级
1. (一般表达)I'm sorry to hear that you can't make friends.
→(高级表达)I'm sorry youare having trouble in making friends.(have trouble in)
2. (一般表达)First,get to know what your classmates like and what they don't like.
→(高级表达)First,why not learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes?(why not...)
3. (一般表达)Second,taking an active part in the discussions in your class helps to show you are friendly.
→(高级表达)Second,it will help you to show you are friendlyif you take an active part in the discussions in your class.(it作形式主语)
连句成篇:
Dear Xiao Dong,
I'm sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
First,why not learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes? Then you can have much in common with them,which helps you get along well with them. Second,it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the discussions in your class. Third,it would be a good idea to help others when they are in trouble.
With time going on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you follow the tips above.
Yours,
Miss Wang
评分判断:
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order?
Does the writer give reasons for the advice?
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?
Is the handwriting easy to read?

答案： 第一步
第一 一般将来
第二步
要陈述自己的关心 问题产生的原因 建议
自己的希望与祝福
第三步
1.have trouble in making friends 2.likes and dislikes 3.get along well with 4.in trouble
5.take an active part in
第四步
1.are having trouble in making friends 2.why not learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes
3.it will help you to show you are friendly