《2025年春如金卷课时作业本九年级英语全一册沪教版》

典例解析
英语课上,你们开展了一次以“我们能做些什么来让家成为一个更快乐的地方”为主题的讨论,同学们都表达了自己的想法。请根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文,向英语校刊投稿。
要点：1. 多和家人在一起；
2. 与家人分享快乐；
3. ……
要求：1. 包含以上要点,可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 不少于80词。
审题立意
1. 文体：议论文 2. 人称：第一人称 3. 时态：一般现在时
提纲导写
＞ 开头段：引出写作话题。
助力词汇：English class; have a discussion about; make one's home a happier place; share; ideas
试写：______
＞ 主体段：同学们的想法：1. 多和家人在一起；2. 与家人分享快乐；3. 为家人准备生日礼物。
助力词汇：spend more time with; get together; understand each other; share happiness; for example; prize; joy; celebrate; important; presents; birthday
试写：1. ______
2. ______
3. ______
＞ 结尾段：你自己的想法：表达对家人的爱和关心。
助力词汇：in one's opinion; show love; care for; a good idea; a cup of tea; take action; create a happier environment
试写：______
顺理成文
In our English class, we had a discussion about "What can we do to make our home a happier place?". ① We shared different ideas.
Some people say it's better to spend more time with our family. ② The more we get together, the better we understand each other. ③ Some think that family members should share happiness with each other. For example, when we get a prize, we can share the joy with our family members and celebrate together. ④ Others believe that it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays. ⑤
In my opinion, showing love and care for family is a good idea. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like making a cup of tea for them makes them happier. So, let's take action to create a happier environment for our home. ⑥
亮点分析
① 开篇点题,自然、流畅地引出下文。
② 使用“it's better to do sth.”句型引出第一种观点,简洁明了。
③ 使用“the + 比较级 ..., the + 比较级 ...”句型进一步阐释观点。
④ 使用 when 引导的时间状语从句进行举例说明,使文章内容更加充实。
⑤ 使用“it's + adj. + to do sth.”句型作宾语从句来表达第三种观点,丰富了文章的句式结构。
⑥ 使用祈使句呼吁大家一起行动起来,使文章结尾更具感染力。

答案： How to Make Our Home a Happier PlaceOur home is the most important place in our lives. To make it a happier place, we can do several things. First, we should spend more time with our family. Instead of always playing on our phones, we can have dinner together and talk about our daily life. Second, sharing happiness with family members is very important. When we achieve something good, telling our parents will make them happy too. Third, we should help with housework. Doing some simple chores like cleaning our room or washing dishes can make our parents feel relaxed. Finally, we need to learn to understand each other. When we have different opinions, we should talk calmly and try to see things from each other's perspective. By doing these things, our home will become a warmer and happier place for everyone.
@@【解析】：这是一道英语写作题目，要求根据给定的提纲和助力词汇，完成一篇关于“如何使家变得更快乐”的议论文。题目提供了开头段、主体段和结尾段的写作提示和关键词汇，需要考生运用这些词汇和提示，按照一般现在时和第一人称的要求，完成一篇结构清晰、内容连贯的议论文。在写作过程中，考生需要注意以下几点：1. 开头段要引出写作话题，可以简要介绍在英语课上进行的讨论。2. 主体段要分别阐述同学们的想法，包括多和家人在一起、与家人分享快乐、为家人准备生日礼物等，并运用助力词汇进行表达。3. 结尾段要表达自己的想法，强调对家人的爱和关心，并提出具体的行动建议。【答案】：In our English class, we had a discussion about "What can we do to make our home a happier place?". I'm glad to share our ideas here.Some people say it's better to spend more time with our family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. We can have family gatherings often, talking and laughing together. Some think that family members should share happiness with each other. For example, when we get a prize, we can share the joy with our family members and celebrate together. It makes us feel closer and more connected. Others believe that it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays. It's a way to show our love and care for them.In my opinion, showing love and care for family is a good idea. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like making a cup of tea for them makes them happier. We can also help with household chores, give them hugs, or simply listen to their stories. So, let's take action to create a happier environment for our home.