《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
A 主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”和“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这两个主题群，涉及子主题“自我认识，自我管理，自我提升”和“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。常见的写作任务是根据实际情况或文字提示，写出谈论家规、校规等规章制度的短文，并能适当发表自己的见解，体裁多为记叙文或议论文。
A 素材积累
开头句
①In order to make families better, a lot of families have their own rules.
②Life is always full of all kinds of rules. So is our school.
中间句
①First of all, it’s necessary for us to realize the importance of traffic safety.
②Teenagers are too young to make their own decisions.
结尾句
①In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
②Although these rules are strict, they are good for my growth.
【名言积累】
①Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 无规矩不成方圆。
②A nation has its rule and a family also has one! 国有国法，家有家规！
A 范文剖析
俗话说：“无规矩不成方圆”。为了营造良好的家庭氛围，使子女养成良好的生活习惯，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家规。请根据以下内容提示，先简要介绍Mary和Tom的家规，然后说说你家的家规(2-3条)并谈谈自己的感受。

要求：
1.100词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
审题指导
1.文体：议论文
2.人称：第一人称和第三人称
3.时态：一般现在时
4.写作要点：①Mary的家规；②Tom的家规；③我的家规及对这些家规的看法
思路点拨

范文赏析
9分作文长这样
Nothing Can Be Accomplished Without Rules
In order to make families better, a lot of families have their own rules.
In Mary’s family, ①she is not allowed to talk while eating. Her parents think it’s a bad behavior. For Tom, he can’t watch TV or play the mobile phone at home. If he does so, his parents will be angry with him. And going to bed before ten is a must. ②His parents think it’s good for his health.
Every family has its own rules. ③There are also some rules in my family. ④First, ⑤my parents care much about my exam results. I’m not allowed to make mistakes because of carelessness. ⑥Second, going out at night is not allowed. If I do want to hang out with my friends at night, I must ⑦let my parents know.
You may think my parents put too much pressure on me by making such strict rules. But I can understand them because they really want me to have a bright future.
【温馨提示】请将上述加黑的部分按对应的序号在下面的方框中一一升格！
我想要满分作文
Nothing Can Be Accomplished Without Rules 升格技巧
In order to make families better, a lot of families have their own rules. 技巧一：巧用逻辑连词升格①
In Mary’s family, talking while eating is a bad behavior, ①__________ (she is not allowed to do that). For Tom, he can’t watch TV or play the mobile phone at home. If he does so, his parents will be angry with him. And going to bed before ten is a must. In his parents’ eyes, ②__________ (早睡早起身体好).
Every family has its own rules. ③__________ (我家也是). ④__________ (一方面), my parents ⑤__________ (非常关注) my exam results. I’m not allowed to make mistakes because of carelessness. ⑥__________ (另一方面), going out at night is not allowed. If I do want to hang out with my friends at night, I must ⑦__________ (和……保持联系) my parents all the time.
You may think my parents put too much pressure on me by making such strict rules. But I can understand them because they really want me to have a bright future. 技巧二：巧用谚语升格② 技巧三：巧用倒装句升格③ 技巧四：巧用衔接词升格④⑥ 技巧五：巧用短语升格⑤⑦

答案： ①so ②early to bed and early to rise is good for health ③So does mine. ④For one thing ⑤pay too much attention to ⑥For another thing ⑦keep in touch with