《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
A 主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群，涉及子主题“中外名胜古迹的相关知识和游览体验”。常见的写作任务是根据所提供的材料进行推测，分析物品的归属以及神秘事件的各种可能性。体裁多为记叙文或说明文。
A 素材积累
开头句
①Last week, something strange happened in my neighborhood.
②There are many mysteries in the natural world, and the Longyou Caves are one of them.
中间句
①At first, people thought they were a natural wonder.
②They tried to solve the problem, but they couldn't find out what was making noises.
③In 1992, several local farmers accidentally discovered these underground caves.
结尾句
①What a scary and strange experience!
②The real history of the Longyou Caves still remains unexplained.
【名言积累】
①It takes all sorts to make a world. 大千世界，无奇不有。
②Great things in the world must be done in detail. 天下大事，必作于细。
A 范文剖析
1992年，一个庞大的地下石窟群在浙江省龙游县被几位农民偶然发现，人们称其为龙游石窟。很快，人们发现这些石窟并非天然形成。那么，这些石窟是何时建造的？是谁建造的？为何建造？这些在史书上均无记载。这使得龙游石窟成为世界上最神秘的地下建筑之一。请你根据下列提示，写一篇题为“The Mystery of the Longyou Caves”的短文，参加下周主题为“World Mystery”的英语活动课。词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
1.龙游石窟是一个拥有24个人造洞穴的石窟群，大约占地38万平方米；
2.有特殊的排水系统；
3.各个洞穴位置特殊，可以获得较好的采光。
参考词汇：county n. 县；complex n. 建筑群；drainage system 排水系统；illumination n. 采光
审题指导
1.文体：说明文
2.人称：第三人称
3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
4.写作要点：①介绍龙游石窟被发现的时间；②介绍龙游石窟的相关信息；③介绍龙游石窟之谜
思路点拨

范文赏析
9分作文长这样
The Mystery of the Longyou Caves
There are many mysteries in the natural world, and the Longyou Caves are one of them.
Beginning
They are considered one of the most mysterious underground structures in the world.
The Longyou Caves, which are a complex of 24 man-made caves, lie in Longyou County, Zhejiang Province. ①It covers an area of about 380,000 square meters. In 1992, several local farmers ②accidentally discovered these underground caves.
Body
At first, ③people thought they were a natural wonder. ④But after further research, it was discovered that these are man-made ones with a special drainage system. ⑤And every cave can get sunlight, ⑥so they have good illumination.
⑦Now we still don't know exactly who built these caves and why. The real history of the Longyou Caves still remains unexplained. Maybe ⑧we'll be able to solve this mystery some day in the future. Are you interested?
Ending
【温馨提示】请将上述加黑的部分按对应的序号在下面的方框中一一升格！
我想要满分作文
The Mystery of the Longyou Caves
There are many mysteries in the natural world, and the Longyou Caves are one of them. They are considered one of the most mysterious underground structures in the world.
The Longyou Caves, which are a complex of 24 man-made caves, lie in Longyou County, Zhejiang Province. ① （覆盖……的面积） about 380,000 square meters, the underground caves ② （偶然被发现） in 1992 by several local farmers.
At first, ③ （这些洞穴被认为是一处自然奇观）. ④ （然而）, after further research, it was discovered that these are man-made ones with a special drainage system. ⑤ （另外）, every cave can get sunlight. ⑥ （因为这个原因）, they have good illumination.
⑦ （甚至在今天）, we still don't know exactly who built these caves and why. The real history of the Longyou Caves still remains unexplained. Maybe ⑧ some day in the future. Are you interested?
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用动名词作伴随状语升格①
技巧二：巧用被动语态升格②③⑧
技巧三：巧用衔接词或短语升格④⑤⑥⑦

答案： ①Covering an area of ②were discovered by chance/accident ③the caves were thought to be a natural wonder ④However ⑤What's more ⑥For this reason ⑦Even today ⑧the mystery can be solved