《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。常见的写作任务是礼貌地向他人询问信息、准确地描述地理位置或给他人指路，体裁多为说明文或电子邮件等应用文。
素材积累
◆开头句
①I am excited to hear that you're coming to our school. Let me tell you how to get there.
②I need to get ready for the new life there, so can you help me with these questions?
◆中间句
①First of all, could you please tell me the way to your school?
②When you get off the bus at the bus station, go down Garden Street until you see a post office on your left.
◆结尾句
①I'm looking forward to your reply/coming.
②I will appreciate it if you can help me.
【名言积累】
①All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。
②Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. 生活没有目标，就像航海没有罗盘。
范文剖析
假如你是 Tom，你将去一所新的学校学习两年，因此你想了解一些关于新学校的信息。请你在学校的论坛网站上写一封电子邮件，礼貌地询问一些问题，内容包括：
1. 怎样去新学校；
2. 住在哪里；
3. 在新学校里能做些什么；
4. 那里的天气如何。
要求：语句通顺，可适当发挥。100 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体：应用文
2. 人称：第一人称
3. 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
4. 写作要点：①描述当前的状况和需要的帮助；②想了解的问题；③表达感谢
▶▶思路点拨

▶▶范文赏析
9分作文长这样
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Tom, a student from Sunshine Middle School in London. ①I will study at your school for two years from next month. ②Can you answer me a few questions? I really want to know something about your school ③because I want to prepare for it.
First of all, could you please tell me the way to your school? And how long will it take to get there? ④Where will I live? Besides, ⑤what kind of activities can I take part in after class? Last but not least, ⑥I also want to know the weather there.
Thank you! I will appreciate it if you can help me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
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我想要满分作文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Tom, a student from Sunshine Middle School in London. I will go to your school for ①________（两年的游学）next month. ②________（你介意回答我）a few questions? I really want to know something about your school ③________.
First of all, could you please tell me the way to your school? And how long will it take to get there? ④________（然后，我想要知道我将住在哪里。）Will there be a host family? Besides, ⑤________（如果你能告诉我……将会更好）what kind of activities I can take part in after class. Last but not least, ⑥________（我也正想知道……）about the weather there.
Thank you! I will appreciate it if you can help me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom

升格技巧

技巧一:巧用名词短语升格①

技巧二:巧用礼貌用语升格②④⑤⑥

技巧三:巧用so that 引导的目的状语从句升格③

技巧四:巧用宾语从句升格④

答案： ①a two - year study tour ②Would you mind answering me ③so that I can prepare for it ④Then, I'd like to know where I will live. ⑤it will be better if you can tell me ⑥I'm also wondering