《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
A 主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”这一主题群，涉及子主题“科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新”。常见的写作任务是介绍某项发明的历史、用途、特点等，体裁多为说明文。
A 素材积累
开头句
①With the development of technology, there are more and more inventions created in our lives.
②There’s no doubt that inventions play an important part in our everyday lives.
中间句
①One of the most useful inventions is…
②With the help of … , you can … whenever you want.
③It is regarded as one of the most important inventions in our daily lives.
结尾句
①I believe this kind of invention will be used widely in the future.
②I think all these inventions are very useful and make our life more convenient.
【名言积累】
①Every coin has two sides.事物都有两面性。
②The best way to predict the future is to invent it.预测未来的最好方法就是创造未来。
③One of the greatest human qualities is its creativity.人类最伟大的品质之一便是创造力。
A 范文剖析
发明改变了世界，改变了我们的生活。比如，电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题，根据提示写一篇短文。

要求：
1.短文必须包括图片中的所有内容，可适当增加细节；
2.词数100左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
审题指导
1.文体：说明文
2.人称：第一人称和第三人称
3.时态：一般现在时
4.写作要点：①电视机的优点；②自行车的优点；③你想要发明什么及理由
思路点拨

范文赏析
9分作文长这样
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
Nowadays, there are many useful and cool inventions around us. One of the most useful inventions is the TV. With it, I can find out what’s going on around the world. ①Sometimes I feel stressed. I will watch some interesting programs to relax myself and have fun.
Another great invention is the bicycle. ②Many people regard it as the most environment-friendly transportation. Bicycle riding is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking. ③It is also good for our health.
④I wish to invent a flying car. It is a special car with two wheels and two wings. ⑤You can drive the car on the ground. You can also fly it in the air. The flying car is the best choice if time is limited.
【温馨提示】请将上述加黑的部分按对应的序号在下面的方框中一一升格！
我想要满分作文
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. Nowadays, there are many useful and cool inventions around us. One of the most useful inventions is the TV. With it, I can find out what’s going on around the world. ①__________
__________
Another great invention is the bicycle. ②__________ the most environment-friendly transportation. Bicycle riding is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking.
③__________(更重要的是),it is good for our health.
④__________(至于我),I wish to invent a flying car. It is a special car with two wheels and two wings. ⑤__________. The flying car is the best choice if time is limited.
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用if引导的条件状语从句升格①
技巧二：巧用被动语态升格②
技巧三：巧用衔接词升格③④
技巧四：巧用not only … but also句型升格⑤

答案： ①If sometimes I feel stressed,I will watch some interesting programs to relax myself and have fun. ②It is regarded as ③What's more ④As for me ⑤You can not only drive the car on the ground but also fly it in the air