《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
A 主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”这一主题群，涉及子主题“科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新”。常见的写作任务是描述某个产品的历史、特点、产地、材质、用途等方面的信息，体裁多为说明文。
A 素材积累
开头句
①Sky lanterns are my favorite traditional Chinese art, for they are colorful and beautiful.
②I'd like to introduce something about paper cutting to you, which is my favorite Chinese art form.
中间句
①It’s a treasure of Chinese culture and a symbol of Chinese people’s intelligence.
②The paper can be made into different pictures, such as animals, flowers, Chinese characters with good meanings and so on.
结尾句
①I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as beauty, love and family.
②They remind us that with the development of society, culture keeps changing, but something will remain unchanged.
【名言积累】
①No pains, no gains. 不劳则无获。
②No man can make a good coat with bad cloth. 巧匠难以劣布制美服。
③Imagination is the source of creation. 想象是创作之源。
A 范文剖析
中国的美食文化博大精深，源远流长，每个城市都有自己的特色美食。哪种美食最能代表你的家乡？请写一篇英语作文，介绍你最喜欢的一种家乡特色美食。
内容提示：
1. What is it?
2. How is it made?
3. Why do local people like to eat it?
要求：
1. 必须包含提示中的所有要点，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 词数100左右。
审题指导
1. 文体：说明文
2. 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
3. 时态：一般现在时
4. 写作要点：①你最喜欢的家乡特色美食是什么；②它是如何制作的；③为什么当地人喜欢它
思路点拨

范文赏析
9分作文长这样
My favorite hometown food is jianbing guozi, a popular street food in Tianjin. ①It is a traditional Chinese breakfast and has things like batter, fried eggs, and guozi, a kind of deep-fried dough stick. All these ingredients create a delicious dish. ②If you want to make jianbing guozi, you need to start by spreading some batter on a hot pan. Then crack an egg on top of it. Next, add some sweet sauce and guozi on top ③and then roll it all up.
The local people in Tianjin love jianbing guozi because it is healthy, cheap and ④easy to buy. For me, ⑤jianbing guozi is a great breakfast and it has Tianjin’s special taste. Both local people and visitors enjoy it.
If you visit Tianjin, don’t forget to give it a try!
【温馨提示】请将上述加黑的部分按对应的序号在下面的方框中一一升格！
我想要满分作文
My favorite hometown food is jianbing guozi, a popular street food in Tianjin. ①__________batter, fried eggs, and guozi, a kind of deep-fried dough stick. All these ingredients create a delicious dish.
②__________（要制作煎饼馃子）, you need to start by spreading some batter on a hot pan. Then crack an egg on top of it. Next, add some sweet sauce and guozi on top ③__________.
The local people in Tianjin love jianbing guozi because it is healthy, cheap and ④__________（在上班或上学的路上很方便买到）. For me, ⑤______________________________. Both local people and visitors enjoy it.
If you visit Tianjin, don’t forget to give it a try!
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用be known as和be made with升格①
技巧二：巧用不定式作目的状语升格②
技巧三：巧用before引导的时间状语从句升格③
技巧四：巧用be convenient to短语升格④
技巧五：巧用not only…but also句型和a symbol of短语升格⑤

答案： ①It is known as a traditional Chinese breakfast and mainly made with ②To make jianbing guozi ③before you roll it all up ④convenient to buy on the way to work or school ⑤jianbing guozi is not only a great breakfast, but also a symbol of Tianjin's special taste and culture