《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版陕西专版》

单元写作小专题
A 主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”这一主题群，涉及子主题“自我认识，自我管理，自我提升”。常见的写作任务是介绍自己的变化，体裁多为记叙文或电子邮件等应用文。
A 素材积累
开头句
①Over these years, great changes have taken place in many ways of our lives.
②How time flies! More than two years has quickly passed since I came to the high school. I find I have changed a lot.
③I'm glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past five years.
中间句
①At school, I was so shy that I was afraid of speaking in front of others.
②As for travel, we used to go on a trip by bike, bus or train. Now we travel abroad by air, and we can even travel around the world on the Internet without a passport.
结尾句
①Thanks to my teachers and parents, I've become a better person.
②I take pride in great changes in our lives. I'm so happy that I can live a good life.
【名言积累】
①Many a little makes a miracle. 积少成多。
②Doing is better than saying. 行胜于言。
③An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
A 范文剖析
进入初中后，你发现自己在生活和学习能力上都有了很大的提升，变得越来越独立了，这与父母及老师对你的帮助是分不开的。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文，在下周的英语课上分享父母和老师是如何帮助你的。

参考词汇：confident 自信的
审题指导
1.文体：记叙文
2.人称：第一人称
3.时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
4.写作要点：①父母和老师给了我什么帮助；②我取得了哪些进步
思路点拨

范文赏析
9分作文长这样
Since I entered middle school, I've become more independent both in study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed.
At home, ①I was a lazy and untidy girl before. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, ②they always say something good to me. ③I become more hard-working and confident because they encourage me a lot. These changes have a great influence on my life. ④Now I can take good care of myself.
At school, English used to be a headache to me. ⑤My teachers showed me different useful learning methods. They also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. That's why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone. ⑥They help me do better than before.
Thanks to my teachers and parents, my life has changed a lot. I can't fully express my thanks for their help!
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我想要满分作文
Since I entered middle school, I've become more independent both in study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed.
At home, ①________________________. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, ②________________________. ③________________________ These changes have a great influence on my life. ④________________________
At school, English used to be a headache to me. ⑤________________________ That's why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone. ⑥________________________
Thanks to my teachers and parents, my life has changed a lot. I can't fully express my thanks for their help!
升格技巧
技巧一：巧用本单元所学的used to do sth. 句型升格①
技巧二：巧用含take pride in sb. 的宾语从句升格②
技巧三：“The+比较级…，the+比较级…”句型升格③
技巧四：巧用短语be able to升格④
技巧五：巧用not only…but also…句型升格⑤
技巧六：巧用with one's help短语升格⑥

答案： ①I used to be a lazy and untidy girl ②they always tell me that they take pride in me ③The more they encourage me, the more hard - working and confident I become. ④Now I am able to take good care of myself. ⑤My teachers not only showed me different useful learning methods, but also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. ⑥With their help, I did better than before.