《2025年金版新学案高中英语必修第三册》

NO.4 牛刀小试 续写实战 续写原创“6+3”之高考题源改编
创意聊天长椅 保障银龄老人安全交友
[写作任务 》阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1] Detective Sgt.Ashley Jones works at the Avon and Somerset Police department in England.During his efforts to combat senior citizen loneliness,Jones realized that,with the rapid development of society,over 9 million people in the UK suffered from frequent or permanent loneliness,and 17% of elderly people had contact with friends and family members less than once per week.
[2] Loneliness is a serious social problem
that can contribute to depression as well as
crimes.The elderly people are so eager to
communicate with others that they fall victim
to cheaters.Suzanne who had been cheated of her money was a typical example.
[3] It was obvious that the cheater had
done his homework and found that Suzanne
was an old lady living alone,with barely any
visitors.Then,every morning,she would get a
call from a stranger who eventually convinced
her that he was her long lost friend.Then out
of sympathy,she lent him about f 31,000 as he
was poor and in desperate need.Even after
knowing she was cheated,she said that she
didn't actually mind being cheated,which made
Jones shocked,“ Otherwise,I would never
speak to another person for weeks on end," she
said.
[4] It bothered Jones for a long time.He
decided to do something about it.That's when
he made a significant discovery,which could
prevent it in a clever way.The solution was
chat benches−specially designated benches in
local parks that encouraged people to interact
and get to know each other.
[5] First Jones convinced the police
department to allow him to set up a couple of
“ chat benches ” in two of their local parks.
Then he hung a colorful sign on each of the
benches that read:“ HAPPY TO CHAT.Sit
here if you don't mind someone stopping to say
hello."
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Fantastically,it began to gain attention.
_
______________________________
______________________________
Therefore,the idea was catching on
quickly.______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
[写作思路 》)
①一审 审要素

①二定 定主题:正能量原则

①三推测 两步段首句定发展:三衔接原则
(-)标出段首句的关键句
第一段:Fantastically,it began to gain attention.
第二段:Therefore,the idea was catching on quickly.
(二)基于三衔接原则:利用复现、代词指代及过
渡衔接词三大方法做好衔接。
①根据第一段的段首句可知，设立聊天长椅这
件事开始受到关注。第一段应描写:所有的
都坐满了人，大家在开心地进行
。
②根据第二段的段首句可知，这个想法流行起
来。第二段应描写:这个想法流行起来的表
现可以分为两步:首先,琼斯(Jones)在当地增
加了长椅的数量;其次，鉴于其口有效性口无
效性，这个方法在更口多的口少的地方得到
推广。
③由此可推测第一段的结局:成为安
全的平台，让老年人安全地，且不会
成为的受害者。第二段的结局:这
种方法最大限度地解决了老年人的
问题，并且让他们收获良多。
①四构思 每段三个微情节原则

五遣词造句 连词成句，连句成文
1.高级词汇及语块
①n. 招牌;指示牌
② adj. 积极的;活跃的
③ adj. 欢乐的;令人愉快的
④11. 交谈;对话
⑤ adv. 明显地
⑥71. 平台
⑦U. 常去;常到
⑧n. 方式;方法
⑨ 被完全占用
⑩ 忙于;从事
⑪ 范围从……到……
拆除;消除;破除
⑬ 防止;阻止
⑭ 设置;设立
⑮ 期待;期望
2.find 十宾语十宾语补足语
指示牌建起没几天，琼斯就发现长椅上坐满
了白发苍苍的老人。
Just a few days after the signs went up,Jones
with gray hair.
3.独立主格结构
他们正坐在那里积极、愉快的交谈，脸上露出
真诚、幸福的笑容。
They were sitting there and engaged in active
and joyful conversations,____________________
______________________________.
4.where 引导定语从句
很明显，长椅成了一个安全的平台，打破了阻
碍老年人打招呼的无形的社会障碍。
Apparently,the benches became a safe
platform ______________________________
______________________________.
5.形容词短语作状语十 where 引导定语从句
首先，(琼斯)很满意他的想法的出现，他设立
了更多的长椅，大部分在老年人常去的地方。
First,,Jones set up
more benches,mostly in places .
6.with 复合结构
不久后，英国有超过100条聊天长椅被设立，
还有数百条正在建设中。
Shortly after,there were over 10 o chat
benches built throughout England,__________
______________________________.
7.总结全文画龙点睛的升华; not only 引起部分
倒装十动词−ing 形式作状语
长椅不仅成为减少犯罪的有效方法，而且鼓
励那些相同年龄的人互动以及相互了解，因
此获得了积极的效果。
______________________________
to cut down crimes,but they also encouraged
those of similar ages to interact and get to
know each other,thus ______________________
①六成文 誊写清晰，字迹工整
Fantastically,it began to gain attention.
_
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
Therefore,the idea was catching on
quickly.______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________

答案：
一审：Police department; England; senior; communicate with; victim; bothered; prevent; chat benches; interact; know; serious social problem; crimes; loneliness; depression; sympathy; shocked
二定：prevent; chat benches; interact; know; crimes; interact; know
三推测：(一)第一段：Fantastically, it began to gain attention.
第二段：Therefore, the idea was catching on quickly.
(二)①长椅；交流 ②有效性；多的 ③长椅；交流；骗子；孤独
四构思：第一段
情节：①长椅 ②交流 ③ 有效性
动作链：be fully occupied; beam; break down; prevent...from...
心理描写：active; joyful/happy; happiness
第二段
情节：①增加 ②多的 ③孤独
动作链：set up; look forward to; combat; serve as; interact
心理描写：satisfied; positive
五遣词造句：1.①sign ②active ③joyful/happy ④conversation ⑤apparently ⑥platform ⑦frequent ⑧approach ⑨be fully occupied ⑩be engaged in ⑪range from...to... ⑫break down ⑬prevent...from... ⑭set up ⑮look forward to
2. found the benches fully occupied by people
3. faces beaming with sincere happiness
4. where invisible social barrier that kept elderly people from saying hello was broken down
5. satisfied with the development of his idea; where senior citizens frequented
6. with hundreds under construction
7. Not only did the benches serve as an effective means; gaining a positive outcome
六成文：
Fantastically, it began to gain attention. Just a few days after the signs went up, Jones found the benches fully occupied by people with gray hair. They were sitting there and engaged in active and joyful conversations, faces beaming with sincere happiness. Their topics ranged from daily routines to their entertainment activities. Apparently, the benches became a safe platform where invisible social barrier that kept elderly people from saying hello was broken down. Most importantly, it prevents the elderly who are cut off from society falling victim to cheaters.
Therefore, the idea was catching on quickly. First, satisfied with the development of his idea, Jones set up more benches, mostly in places where senior citizens frequented. More cities were looking forward to copying his approach for combating loneliness. Shortly after, there were over 100 chat benches built throughout England, with hundreds under construction. Not only did the benches serve as an effective means to cut down crimes, but they also encouraged those of similar ages to interact and get to know each other, thus gaining a positive outcome.