《2026年点金训练精讲巧练高中英语选择性必修第二册外研版》

典题示例
假如你是李华，最近英语课上阅读了 Dodie Smith 写的 I Capture the Castle 这部小说，你的英语老师要求你们用英语写一篇 80 词左右的书评。
Step 1：审题谋篇

Step 2：要点补全
①Dodie Smith’s novel I Capture the Castle isa spiritual journey of（一次心灵旅程）a young writer.
②Sheattempts to record（试图记录）her daily life.
③Cassandraundergoes a definite transformation（经历一个明确的转变）from a child to a mature young adult.
④It’s onlythe course of several months（几个月的过程）.
⑤I wouldrecommend it to older teenagers（把它推荐给年龄稍大的青少年），mainly because they cansee into her way of thinking（领会她的思维方式）.
⑥Readexactlywhat she is feeling when she thinks about problems（她思考问题时的感受）.
Step 3：句式升级
①用 as 引导的时间状语从句合并 Step 2 中的①②句Dodie Smith’s novel I Capture the Castle is a spiritual journey of a young writer as she attempts to record her daily life.
②用 even though 引导的让步状语从句连接 Step 2 中的③④句Cassandra undergoes a definite transformation from a child to a mature young adult，even though it’s only the course of several months.
③用 and 连接 Step 2 中的⑤⑥句I would recommend it to older teenagers，mainly because they can see into her way of thinking and read exactly what she is feeling when she thinks about problems.
Step 4：连句成篇Dodie Smith’s novel I Capture the Castle is a spiritual journey of a young writer as she attempts to record her daily life.Cassandra lives in a fourteenth-century English castle with her family.Cassandra undergoes a definite transformation from a child to a mature young adult，even though it’s only the course of several months.I would recommend it to older teenagers，mainly because they can see into her way of thinking and read exactly what she is feeling when she thinks about problems.

答案： Step 1:审题谋篇 议论文；一般现在时；第三人称；Step 2:要点补全 ①a spiritual journey of；②attempts to record；③undergoes a definite transformation；④the course of several months；⑤recommend it to older teenagers；see into her way of thinking；⑥ what she is feeling when she thinks about problems；Step 3:句式升级 ①Dodie Smith’s novel I Capture the Castle is a spiritual journey of a young writer as she attempts to record her daily life.；②Cassandra undergoes a definite transformation from a child to a mature young adult，even though it’s only the course of several months.；③I would recommend it to older teenagers，mainly because they can see into her way of thinking and read exactly what she is feeling when she thinks about problems.；Step 4:连句成篇 Dodie Smith’s novel I Capture the Castle is a spiritual journey of a young writer as she attempts to record her daily life. Cassandra lives in a fourteenth-century English castle with her family. Cassandra undergoes a definite transformation from a child to a mature young adult，even though it’s only the course of several months. I would recommend it to older teenagers，mainly because they can see into her way of thinking and read exactly what she is feeling when she thinks about problems.