《2025年优化探究同步导学案高中英语选择性必修第一册人教版》

典题尝试
请根据下面的内容提示,以 Mount Wutai 为题介绍一下五台山。词数80左右。
1. 五台山位于山西省东北部,是世界五大佛教圣地之一;
2. 五台山主要包括五座山峰,峰顶平坦如台,故称五台;
3. 山顶常年积雪,山坡绿树环绕,是一个避暑胜地;
4. 寺庙曾经多达300多座;
5. 五台山不仅以其优美的自然风光闻名,而且还以古建筑、历史文物等著称。
参考词汇：佛教圣地 Buddhist Holy Land;历史文物 historical relics
［审题谋篇］
第一步 明确要求
该写作属于介绍景点的写作,故要用第 三人称来写;文章的主题内容是介绍景点五台山,时态用 一般现在时。
第二步 确定段落
本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手：
Para. 1 简要介绍 五台山的位置以及与佛教的关系;
Para. 2 详细介绍 五台山名字的由来、地理、气候等;
Para. 3 总结上文 五台山值得一观。
第三步 核心词汇
1. be located in 位于
2. consist of 由……组成
3. all the year round 全年
4. be surrounded with 由……环绕
5. be famous for 因……闻名
第四步 句式升级
1. Mount Wutai is located in the northeast of Shanxi Province and it’s one of the world’s five famous Buddhist Holy Lands.(一般表达)
→ Located in the northeast of Shanxi Province, Mount Wutai is one of the world’s five famous Buddhist Holy Lands.(高级表达)
2. Mount Wutai is famous for its fantastic natural landscape and it is also famous for its ancient buildings and historical relics.(一般表达)
→Mount Wutai is not only famous for its fantastic natural landscape, but also for its ancient buildings and historical relics.(高级表达)
［妙笔成篇］
Mount Wutai
Located in the northeast of Shanxi Province, Mount Wutai is one of the world’s five famous Buddhist Holy Lands.
Mount Wutai mainly consists of five peaks and their tops are as flat as a pancake, so they are named “Mount Wutai”.The peaks are heavy with snow all the year round and the slopes are surrounded with trees, making it a famous summer resort. There used to beat least three hundred temples there. Mount Wutai is not only famous for its fantastic natural landscape, but also for its ancient buildings and historical relics. It’s really a great tourist attraction worth a visit.
［评分判断］
1. Is the introduction clear?
2. Does the introduction include all the important points about the place?
3. Does the writer use correct grammar, punctuation and spelling?
［亮点点评］
该范文结构完整,作者首先简要介绍了五台山的位置以及与佛教的关系;然后详细介绍了五台山名字的由来、地理、气候等;最后写五台山值得一观。要点齐全,语言规范地道。句式上,作者巧妙地使用了非谓语动词、not only... but also等高级句式,亮点频出,表达形式多样。总之,该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文,值得学习。

答案： 第一步
三 一般现在时
第二步
五台山的位置以及与佛教的关系 五台山名字的由来、地理、气候等 五台山值得一观
第三步
1.be located in 2.consist of 3.all the year round 4.be surrounded with 5.be famous for
第四步
1.Located in the northeast of 2.not only but also