《2025年优化探究同步导学案高中英语选择性必修第一册人教版》

典题尝试
请根据以下内容写一篇 80 词左右的文章,介绍中国科学家钱学森。其主要经历:
1. 1911 年出生于上海,后赴美留学；
2. 在美国获航空、数学博士学位；
3. 克服了重重困难,于 1955 年回到祖国；
4. 长期从事航空航天研究工作,为中国的航天事业做出了巨大贡献,被誉为“中国航天之父”；
5. 2009 年于北京去世。
参考词汇:航天航空科学技术 aerospace science and technology
[审题谋篇]
第一步 审题构思
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| 布局文章架构 | 第一段：介绍钱学森的个人生平；
第二段：介绍钱学森的经历、事迹和成就；
第三段：对钱学森的评价 |
| 列出核心要点 | 1. 钱学森的概况及经历；
2. 钱学森的主要成就及人们对他的评价 |
第二步 核心词汇
1. be regarded as 被认为是
2. further study 进修;深造
3. obtain one’s doctor’s degree 获得某人的博士学位
4. devote oneself to 献身于
5. pass away 去世
6. make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献
第三步 由词扩句
1. 钱学森 1911 年出生于上海。他被誉为“中国航天之父”。
Qian Xuesen was born in 1911 in Shanghai. He was regarded as the father of China's space program.
2. 钱学森赴美深造,在美国获航空、数学博士学位。
Qian Xuesen went to America for further study
第十三段
and obtained his doctor’s degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.
3. 虽然有很多困难,但他于 1955 年成功回到祖国。
He succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though there were many difficulties.
4. 他致力于航空航天科学技术,为中国的航天事业做出了巨大贡献。
He devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and made great contributions to the cause of China's aerospace.
5. 2009 年他于北京去世。
He passed away in Beijing in 2009.
6. 毫无疑问,他被认为是世界上最著名的科学家之一。
There is no doubt that he is regarded as one of the most famous scientists in the world.
7. 他得到了中国人民的尊敬和钦佩。
He has received the respect and admiration from Chinese people.
第四步 句式升级
用过去分词短语改写第三步中的句 1
Qian Xuesen,regarded as the father of China's space program,was born in 1911 in Shanghai.
[妙笔成篇]
Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of China's space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.
Qian went to America for further study and obtained his doctor's degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. He succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though there were many difficulties. He devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and made great contributions to the
第十四段
cause of China's aerospace. Unfortunately, he passed away in Beijing in 2009.
There is no doubt that he is regarded as one of the most famous scientists in the world. He has received the respect and admiration from Chinese people.
[评分判断]
1. Does the writer describe the person's appearance or personality?
2. Does the writer tell impressive stories of the person's life?
3. Does the writer say why the person is great?
4. Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person?
5. Does the text include all the key information?
[亮点评评]
该范文结构完整,作者首先总体介绍(包括其身份和出生年份及地点),然后介绍钱学森的主要经历,最后总结全文(说明其成就以及人们对他的评价)。要点齐全,语言规范地道,环环相扣。文章表达自然紧凑;在句式上,作者巧妙地使用了状语从句等句式,亮点频出,表达形式多样。总之,该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文,值得学习。

答案： 第二步
1.be regarded as 2.further study 3.obtain one’s doctor’s degree
4.devote oneself to 5.pass away 6.make great contributions to
第三步
1.was born in 1911 was regarded as the father of 2.went to America for further study obtained his doctor’s degree 3.succeeded in coming back to 4.devoted himself to 5.passed away in Beijing in 2009 6.There is no doubt that he is regarded as 7.has received the respect and admiration
第四步
Qian Xuesen,regarded as the father of China's space program,was born in 1911 in Shanghai.