《2025年优化探究同步导学案高中英语选择性必修第一册人教版》

典题尝试
互联网已经成为现代人必不可少的通信工具,在人们的日常生活中起着重要的作用,但它也有一些负面影响。请就互联网的利与弊发表你的见解,并阐述你的理由。内容包括:

注意:词数80左右。
[审题谋篇]
第一步 明确要求
该写作属于正反观点对比类作文,故要用第三人称来写;文章的主题内容是谈论网络的利与弊以及你的看法,时态要用一般现在时。
第二步 确定段落
本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手:
Para. 1 引出话题;
Para. 2 互联网的好处和弊端;
Para. 3 自己的观点。
第三步 核心词汇
1. play an important part in在……中起着重要作用
2. advantage优点
3. disadvantage弊端
4. contribute to有助于,促成
5. do harm to对……有害
6. be addicted to对……上瘾
7. make full use of充分利用
第四步 句式升级
1. Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people. The Internet plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. (一般表达)
→Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people, which plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. (高级表达)
2. The Internet can provide a great deal of the latest information for us. We can send e - mails to our friends, contributing to promoting social communication. (一般表达)
→Not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us but also we can send e - mails to our friends, contributing to promoting social communication. (高级表达)
3. The Internet can easily lead to physical problems and do harm to our eyesight. (一般表达)
→The Internet can easily lead to physical problems, doing harm to our eyesight. (高级表达)
[妙笔成篇]
Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people, which plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages should also not be ignored.
The Internet brings us many advantages. Firstly, not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us but also we can send e - mails to our friends, contributing to promoting social communication. Secondly, the Internet makes shopping online convenient. However, the Internet has many disadvantages. It can easily lead to physical problems, doing harm to our eyesight. Surfing the Internet for a long time may affect our work and rest. If addicted to the Internet, teenagers tend to fall behind others at school.
In my view, the most important is that we should learn how to make full use of its advantages while avoiding its disadvantages.
[评分判断]
1. Does the essay say what the writer thinks about the topic?
2. Does the body discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the advance in technology?
3. Are signposts used to help the reader understand the purpose of each paragraph?
4. Does the conclusion state the writer's position?
[亮点点评]
该范文结构完整,第一段引出话题;第二段论述互联网的好处和弊端;第三段发表自己的观点。要点齐全,语言规范地道,环环相扣。文中 nowadays, firstly, secondly, but, however 等过渡词的衔接使表达自然紧凑,环环相扣;在句式上,作者巧妙地使用了定语从句、非谓语动词等句式,亮点频出,表达形式多样。总之,该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文,值得学习。

答案： 第一步 三 一般现在时 第二步 引出话题 互联网的好处和弊端 自己的观点 第三步 1.play an important part in 2.advantage 3.disadvantage 4.contribute to 5.do harm to 6.be addicted to 7.make full use of 第四步 1.which 2.Not only can but also 3.doing harm to