《2025年全效学习学业评价方案八年级英语上册人教版》

技法点拨
在科技发展日新月异的今天，我们的生活时刻发生着变化。若干年后，我们的生活将会是什么样子呢？请你根据以下信息写一篇题为“Life in the Future”的英语短文，向大家介绍你所预测的未来生活。

注意：
(1)包括图中至少三项内容，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(3)写作词数为80左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Life in the Future
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Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体：说明文。
2. 人称：第一人称。
3. 时态：一般将来时。
4. 内容：未来生活。
Step 2 搭——搭好框架

Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
What will life in the future ________（……会是什么样子）？
2. 主体内容：
Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us learn ________（大量关于……的信息）the world. Robots will help us do ________（大部分的）the housework. They can help us ________（打扫卫生），cooking or washing. We can ________（购物）and ________（看医生）without going out. Students can study at home ________（在电脑上）. People will live to be over 100 years old because of ________（更好的医疗保健技术）.
3. 总结收尾：
I believe life will be ________（越来越好）.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Life in the Future
What will life in the future be like?
Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us learn a lot of information about the world. ①Robots will help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. ②We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be over 100 years old because of better health care technology.
③I believe life will be better and better.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 将①处用such as补充细节：
________
2. 将②处改为含有“it is possible for sb to do”句式的句子：
________
3. 将③处进行优化，点题并在结尾部分进行升华：
________

答案： Step 3 1. be like 2. a lot of information about; most of; do some cleaning; do some shopping; see a doctor; on computers; better health care technology 3. better and better Step 5 1. Robots will help us do most of the housework, such as cooking breakfast, cleaning the floor, and washing clothes. 2. It is possible for us to do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. 3. In the future, life will be simple and happy. I can’t wait to see all these changes come true one day!