《2025年全效学习学业评价方案八年级英语上册人教版》

技法点拨

新的一年快到了。在新的一年里，大家有什么计划和打算呢？来看看John一家的新年决心吧。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，对他们的新年计划进行介绍。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80左右。
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体：记叙文。
2. 人称：第三人称。
3. 时态：一般将来时。
4. 内容：新年决心。

Step 2 搭——搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
Everyone in John's family has resolutions.
2. 主体内容：
John's father is going to find a part - time job. He wants to make more money. ________（同时），he is going to do more exercise to keep healthy.
John's mother is going to learn to play the violin and cook more delicious food.
John wants to ________（在……方面做得更好）his schoolwork and get better grades. He also wants to learn to play basketball.
John's sister is going to exercise more. She wants to ________（组建排球队）.
3. 总结收尾：
They all hope to have a better beginning of the year.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
①Everyone in John's family has resolutions.
②John's father is going to find a part - time job. He wants to make more money. At the same time，he is going to do more exercise to keep healthy. John's mother is going to learn to play the violin and cook more delicious food. John wants to do better in his schoolwork and get better grades. He also wants to learn to play basketball. ③John's sister is going to exercise more. She wants to make the volleyball team.
④They all hope to have a better beginning of the year.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 在①处开门见山，改写句式：
________
2. 将②处改为含有由so that引导的目的状语从句的复合句：
________
3. 将③处改为含有由because引导的原因状语从句的复合句：
________
4. 在④处用look forward to、full of等进行改写，使再次点题和行文更为流畅：
________

答案： Step 3 2.At the same time；do better in；make the volleyball team Step 5 1.In John’s family，everyone has their own resolutions for a better year. 2.John’s father is going to find a part-time job so that he can make more money. 3.John’s sister is going to exercise more because she wants to make the volleyball team. 4.They all look forward to a bright new start full of hope and good changes!